"Camouflage" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Anger IS an issue On: March 10, 2005 17:38 CST Comment/Review: wow...you handled that flame like a...I don't know, but hey, most poeople in the world would have tracked that dude down and killed them in some gruesome way, I know I would of...great fic!
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 19:37 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehe cool story! but since you havent updated lately i guess you havent been writing it! hey i still want to know about pegasus!
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Reviewed By: Lita_166 On: November 21, 2003 21:33 CST Comment/Review: You handled the flame well, but I think you're confused on one thing. Being a girl never stopped me from masturbating... ^_~ Love the story, by the way.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 00:42 CST Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: nainay On: November 20, 2003 20:25 CST Comment/Review: I think you handled that flame rather well, because I know I would've blown up. I mean did he not see the big YAOI warning in the beginning and besides why was he reading the story if it's so degrading to him, I mean isn't mostly all these stories guyxguyness. HELLO. That's yugioh for ya. I mean who really wants to read about yugi or yami and anzu *shudders* Now that's repulsive, and she is mainly the only girl (accept serenity, mai, and izzu-how eva you spell- and they are well dull) Neway, look at me getting mad like he wrote to me, but I just can't stand people like that, I mean don't like don't read and especially when they flame a greater writer like you that pisses me off, I have to stand up for you, be there for you because you lighten my day with your stories. Ok, I'll stop thankies for updating keep it up.
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Reviewed By: nainay On: November 07, 2003 19:45 CST Comment/Review: yeah update. (sigh) I can see the love between those two floating in the air. wait a second that's not love. AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! X.X
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Title: Don't make it Yami, PLEASE don't make it Yami Reviewed By: The girl On: November 05, 2003 23:16 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Gawd! Do people not have a thousand other Yamix Yugi stories to read? I REALLY hope this is a SetoxYugi story. All of this YYxY is just tedious. I like it, but once in a while I like to read something different. I think Yami can survive a story withOUT Yugi for once.
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Reviewed By: nainay On: November 04, 2003 17:05 CST Comment/Review: yami/yugi, yami/yugi, yami/yugi- please let it be yami/yugi- they're both so fun and exciting and seto's....not...I would like it to be yugi/yami/seto but see as yami and seto are brothers it would be a little...who am I kidding it would be majorly.....akward. Sooooo, any wayz please continue.
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Title: x.x Reviewed By: ReiRei On: October 30, 2003 22:07 CST Comment/Review: pllleeeease pullleeeease no setoxYugi.. urg.. there's just as much of that as YamixYugi.. X.x what am I saying? you prolly chose aready -Rei (YamixYugi will always be my fave couple ^.^)
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 12:09 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I started the story and there was a character named Akito and I thought Nadesico. Then there was a character named Yurika and I knew you were talking about Nadesico! Love that show! Well besides that, I like the story and have no complaints about it... except one. ^_^ Chapters are a wee bit short so that stinks, but the rest is good. Evanesence IS my favorite band. I don't go into have favorite music artists often, only twice actually, so I LOVE your taste. I want this to be a SetxYugi thing. There is waaayyy enough YamixYugi out there. Be different!
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Reviewed By: nainay On: October 29, 2003 18:36 CST Comment/Review: yay> update I'm so happy, I wish there was more to that chappie, but oh well at least it's there. please continue.
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Reviewed By: nainay On: October 28, 2003 19:48 CST Comment/Review: OMG, that was great, a great idea for a story, great plot, great writing, great beginnig, just great. Try to write longer chapters, pleasssssse, oh and I think it should be y/y pairing only because I admire that pairing and seto is so dry, cute, but dry. Oh one more suggestion, I think yugi should be spontanious, not shy or anything, but not straight out ghetto. ok, other than that I hope you're continuing.
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Reviewed By: SliveredDeath On: October 28, 2003 19:35 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is really great! You need to update soon! I can't wait to see were you go with this.
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Title: Ohh My god! Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have got to update soon! I love this so far! And I can't wait for the others and a new thing YOU MADE IT ON MY FAVORITES LIST!!! I love this fanfic so much I will keep an eye out for a new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 16:48 CST Comment/Review: Hehe... Great set-up! You have to continue soon! I can't wait to see Yugi acting like a girl!
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