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"Incubus" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: Huh
Reviewed By: Choi sama  On: August 10, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, I like this. The pairing seemed alright, although everyone was pretty OOC. Which is actually a good thing, it's like seeing some hidden peices of personality. I think you should've made this into a a short series to answer some of those mysterious questions surrounding CYN Inc. (I must have gotten that wrong. I'm sure of it.) Plus, we could see some hot 3x action. Yay. Oh well. It's a bit old anyway, so I expect you've lost interest. Good job on the sex scene though. ^__^b
 Reviewed By: fujinakaheero ----> not signed in  On: August 24, 2004 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um... i just wanted to point out that u spelt Heero's name wrong, u spelt it as Hiiro... or is Hiiro a new character all of a sudden. Story was... kinda weird but cool i guess meh. Anyways yeah... one of ur old pieces but i was bored and needed something to read.

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