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Reviewed By: Calcifer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHAHAHA, OMG LMAO -heart- I laughed so hard while reading this XD Nothing like a good old misunderstanding to make you bawl tears of amusement. Keep up the good work! ~Angel
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Reviewed By: Uchuujin On: April 02, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why isn't there a 9.5 in there..? This might be an EXTREMELY random and past-date review, but, I stumble on things randomly like that. I think my favorite part of this fic was "Emmet?!".. I died. Though I usually don't go for the soap-opera sort of misunderstanding plot.. it worked really well. Of course, you can slide a lot past me if you have an entertaining sense of humor. (Which you do. To the Nth degree.) So, to explaining my ratings: style of writing went perfectly with the sense of humor, spelling and grammar were perfect, creativity only lacking by .5%, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Although most people think writers don't NEED encouragement, of course they do. And it's equally beneficial when they're damn good at writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great a lot of fun to read, I really enjoyed it. You're great with dialogue. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Dark Sadistic Angel On: August 24, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed the complex web you weaved, and am amazed at how you untangled it in such a short time. Very humorous. DSA
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Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness that was funny, i loved how everyone was so confused and came to the wrong conclusions. the only one who seemed to be not so confused was Quatre. oh i loved how you had Wufei acting like a total idiot who lives to be perfect in Heero's eyes. All in all thic fic was absoloutely perfect!
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Title: Indiscretion
Reviewed By: Manga-Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! Very funny, silly...it was very enjoyable to read. I like the way you made Trowa so...Trowa, and Wufei so demented in his sense of holding Heero on a pedestal. ^_^
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Title: Another excellent fic
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm becoming adicted to your work!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 10, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT fic. AWESOME ending! I loved all of it!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Do Quatre & Trowa get together after this?
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Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol! i haven't laughed so hard over a fic! it was terrific! more, please, and soon :)
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 07, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, I like the solution.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 07, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah the pain! The sorrow! The atrocity of it all! Can't you simplify this whole mess? Sure Duo and Heero are fine, but what about the rest of the stuff? You got to update soon and pronto!
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Reviewed By: Vay On: November 06, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now that Duo has a chance to talk to Heero away from the other pilots, and he knows what was said, would he really not have some fun with Wufei's head because of it?
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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~~"Bloody hell, Emmet..." The slightly concussed hunter could barely hear his own words for the ringing in his ears, not that he was making much sense. "What kind of moose call are you using?" ~~ Okay, I rarely actually laugh out loud when reading, unless it's one of your stories. I hit that point with Emmet and just about lost it. *Definitely* rolling on my ass laughing hysterically. Just such a perfect note of humor, after the build-up of the characters trying to get away. Moose calls! Woo! ...I know, I've been remiss in not reviewing every chapter. But hopefully I can make up for it by pointing out that you have such a delightful knack at mixing humor into every situation, with just the right touch. Never too heavy, or too light. Very deft!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 05, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well at least this chapter was less of a torture for Trowa. I can't wait to read more. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 04, 2003 22:03 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I can't believe you did that? You continue, no you haven't stoped torturing my Trowa (snifs) And now Heero is also making assumptions?! If it weren't for the fact that you did a good character depiction for Trowa, I would have joined that linching mob! LOL! Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Now things are getting very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Vay On: November 04, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I guess I didn't give a 10 for Overall Rating cause I don't believe in anything being totally perfect (except our perfect soldier) but consider it as close to perfect as I could give it. I love the way the story is progressing (I've been a fan since 'Whispers' was first posted) so I'm on pins and needles as to what you plan on next. Two things keep coming to mind as to what I think could happen next. I keep picturing the gang confronting Duo in front of Heero leading poor Duo to turn to Heero with BIG chibi eyes and saying "Does this mean you're breaking up with me?" The other scene I can imagine is the pilots think Heero is 'using' Duo forcing Duo to 'stand up for his man'. Please update soon cause I'm just dying from impatience. Added note, I like your take on Trowa, I can see him accepting rejection very easily but could he be drawn to do more than accept it if he feels Quatre is being used? Or is it out of character to have an outburst? I can see an outburst but I can see it erupt then drop down to his usual "..." Maybe I'm saying it wrong, ah well. Take this as the encouragement it was meant to be. Great work!
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 13:56 CST
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I think you did a fine job of using the analogy of physics with Trowa. It's a little different from the style you've used for the rest of the story, but it fits quite well with Trowa's perceptions and attitudes, and explains in a succinct, yet visual way, why he reacts the way he does. His reasoning is logical, if only Trowa-logical, and I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of your screws falling into place (or out of them, as the case may be).
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is what happens when no one says anything and everyone's too busy being embarressed.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 03, 2003 15:37 CST
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Geesh, You really love torturing Trowa. Update soon, I can't wait to find out how this whole mess will be fixed. Keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 31, 2003 14:21 CST
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Hahahahah! That's so hilarious... Dou misunderstanding Wufei's words. When will it all stop? LOL! Update soon, this is just too hilarious. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 30, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! All those misunderstandings are so hilarious. I'm dying of laughter here. First Trowa trying not to be jealous and then my Wufei shaking Heero. You have to update soon. I can't wait to read more of this great fic. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: j On: October 30, 2003 18:09 CST
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*burst in laughter* wow!!! continue please?!
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Reviewed By: _Andromeda_ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:27 CST
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That was kinda weird, but please continue ^__^
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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: j On: October 28, 2003 19:25 CST
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That's rich!!!! update please?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 28, 2003 15:53 CST
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Hahahaha! That was funny. Quatre worrying about Dou. I can't wait to read more. Update soon. This is just so great. Keep up the good job.
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