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Reviewed By: Self_Insertion On: August 07, 2004 06:10 CDT
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SecretFlame, go stick that puritanical attitude of your up your ass. Just because no one reads your mealymouthed stories is no reason to take it out on more... popular writers. If you dind't even read it (You can READ?! Shock horror!) then you certainly are in no position to go and diss others. Anyway, this was really, really good! I'm really glad you updated, BlackHylia!
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Reviewed By: SecretFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:07 CDT
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You know, this is wrong. I didn't read every chapter. Instead, I just read the first one. I skimmed through the others. Kyo wouldn't do that kind of stuff. You shoud have had OOC in there becasue I can never imagine Kyo giving in so easily. And if you're wondering why in the hell am I reading it if I don't like it, then just note I'M NOT. I could tell by he first chapter I wasn't going to like this fic. But hey. That's just my opinion. Some/ Most people liek this fic, and you obviously enjoy writng it, so continue on. I'm just letting you know, I don't.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 14:50 CDT
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*wipes drool* Dammit, but I did want to see some Hatori/Shigure action... Good fic. Veru yummy fic. MORE!
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Reviewed By: YL On: June 25, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! ur a really good writer! keep it ^ *peace sign*
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 15:03 CDT
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oh and I skim through your reviews and just wanted to put my peice of mind. Fuck what Coldheart wrote, noone put a knife to that fucker throat and made her read the fic. So let that bitch rot in .......breath....smiles. Dun let anyone discourage your work, and write whatever you want, however you want. Specially if your'e great at it. HUGS.
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Title: Dehydration from excessive drooling
Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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The chapter titles are as witty and comical as the story. I love this fic, the flaws ..... there are no flaws in a story with lemon pack bisohen going at it. However, awwwwww poor Yuki is left out, can you insert him somewhere. Waves YukixKyo flag. Grins. Well waiting eagerly for the next episode.
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: June 12, 2004 12:51 CDT
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Oh, this fanfic is just ssssoooo naughty but I love it. Please post more chapters soon. I get the impression several more of the Zodiac characters are going to get into the act, so to speak! ^ _ ^
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Reviewed By: crazy2themax On: June 04, 2004 05:54 CDT
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i like! update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Coldheart On: June 03, 2004 13:13 CDT
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This is so wrong people, Kyo is so not like that and would never allow anyone to fuck him so easily. If you think that you can deviate from his true characterization just for your cheap thrills, try coming up with your own characters because your interpretations are so out of character, it's pathetic. And all you KYOUKE-lovers, get a boyfriend then you can fuck him (with a dildo) and stop using Kyo as your fuck-boy. Everyone knows he rather fuck then get fucked. So try to be a little more true to the canon characterizations and do not let your own false notions of Kyo rule your writing, which come off as fantasy fulfullment of what you would love to do to a boy, if you had a dick. I can't stand Semes being Ukes, it's just so not right. Anyways...good luck next time!
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Reviewed By: johnny_depp_luv On: June 03, 2004 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!!!! please update!!!! i love it! i love it! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 03:16 CDT
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*whines and begs for next chapter*
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Reviewed By: babyrubyz On: May 29, 2004 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....any pairing with yuki.......pls....and pls write more fanfic.....love ur fics
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Title: hell yeah!
Reviewed By: Neith On: May 24, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this was very very yummy. ::sighs:: i just LOVE kyou-uke fics...and there are so few it seems. this one was ... very nice, very nice.
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: May 18, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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CURSE THIS CLIFFHANGERS!!!!! All in all awesome fic!! keep it goin! the 3rd chap was hard to read cuz it was like cut off...but i tried to fill in the blanks! ^-^;;
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Reviewed By: Kiki2004 On: May 18, 2004 10:39 CDT
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Wait a minute. How old is Haru in your fic again?? I thought he's supposed to be sixteen and Kyo seventeen?? ...white and black haired fourteen-year-old cupped his face as well and smiled softly. "It's not going to happen to you ever, I promise."... Fourteen?! Haru is fourteen in the fic?? So, uh, how old is Kyo and who's the dominant patner here?? And also, Kyo doesn't really like water, since he is the Cat and all Cats of the previous generations hated water too (he said so himself in the manga). So he is kind of OOC to play in the water with Haru in the first place. But heck, who cares if it's out of character when there's a perfectly lickable, wet and delicious image of Kyo available? I'm glad you updated this story, and even more so when I saw the potential Ayame x Kyo pairing. I have this strange addiction to weird pairings... I wonder who will get lucky with Kyo next?? Could it be... Shigure?? I can only hope so. There are too few Shigure x Kyo fanfictions... u.u Anyways... keep up the good work and update soon! ::whisper:: I want... I want... I want a Kyo x Kisa or Akito x Kyou chapter! >///< There! I told you I like weird couples...
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