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Reviewed By: flamemarkeddarkwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 18:16 CST
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Damn you, UPDATE! I'm really want to read your Gure/Aya/Tori part. Not particularly fond of Shigure/Ayame, absolutely love Ayame/Hatori or Hatori/Ayame (either way it's put is fine)
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 16:50 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!! onegai??? ^.^ C'mon, c'mon! It's July already!!! It's been... *counts* over 6 months, no da! UPDATE!! *looks like she's about to pull an angry Kyou.*
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Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: liko On: July 23, 2005 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...you get straight to the point when responding to flames(read the A.N.) anyhow, that was great...poor kyou though...he'll have to sit down at some point and then....(yea, pain!) anyhow that was great...hope to see more!
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Title: Luv
Reviewed By: Kitchan On: July 08, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luving this thing so much! Poooor Kyou, but then again he's such a sexy beast!!! LOL if I were him I'd cower under the blankets and fake sick but then again they DO have a doctor in the house! ~cracks up~ Really enjoying this and want more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 11:27 CDT
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Kyou and yuki PLZ........................
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Reviewed By: Cappy On: June 16, 2005 19:09 CDT
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you're not ever gonna update anymore...are you... it ended at chapter eight?
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:34 CDT
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WAAAA no more chapters!!! This chapter was WONDERFUL, finally a threesome! And Haru as the poor rejected seme... *laughs* I love all of them... UPDATE SOON PLEASE! According to the date of the last chapter you haven't update since DECEMBER! It's currently MAY!! That's almost half a year! Please don't disappoint *attempts to pout cutely* I was just wondering... are there any male Sohmas left that haven't appeared and fucked in this fic...? I haven't gotten very far so to me, NO!!!
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:24 CDT
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It really is incest... INCEST IS GOOD!!! SEX. BETWEEN. ALL. SOHMAS. V. GOOD! Do these guys have, like, unlimited sex drive? Aya fucks Gure, Haru fucks Kyo, Haru fucks Kyo again, Aya fucks Kyo... and I think I left a few out. *sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:20 CDT
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^_^ I LOVE THEM ALL!!! KYO X EVERYONE FOREVER!!! *grins like a maniac* The way you wrote the "gothic" scene was confusing, was Kyo enjoying it or not? *blinks* He obviously was by the end though! *hugs BH* LOVE YOU! And another thing, I ADORE your chapter titles! So kinky! How on earth do you come up with 'em? And Haru is so twisted it's sexy *grins* Why would Kyo have problems with being hot? He's been fucked by every guy in the house it's kinda hard to deny it... *sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:07 CDT
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I agree, Vegeta and Kyo both make perfect ukes... though I must say, perfect ukes to Goku/Yuki, but Yuki seems to be frigid/straight in this fic... or not?
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:00 CDT
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Kyo really is a screamer! ^_~ Kyo x Ayame seems to be especially kinky though I can't be sure why... *thinks back to Manga Volume 4 where Kyo wakes up to find Ayame in his bed* Hn...
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:52 CDT
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^_^ YAY, it's everyone xKyo!!! How could Gure rape Haru without knowing? The whole heat thing... but your explanation doesn't really make sense and why doesn't Haru just tell Shigure (and go Black and beat the crap out of him). AND WHAT IS AYAME DOING TO KYO? Better be good ^_~.
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:41 CDT
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*pout* Slightly shorter chapter... v. good lemon, though a bit obscure. Kinky Hatori forever!!! Kyo is such a slut *grins* Go KYO!! *sweatdrops* Aya, Gure, Ha'ri, Haru and Kyo basically go around and fuck each other... why can't they all just lock themselves in a closet together dammit? *grins* Hint, hint..
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WAHEY!!! Nice long chapter, lots of yummy slash, Kyo's sudden xHaru v. surprising and Kyo's VERY SUDDEN xHa'ri thing REALLY SHOCKING (but good). Not much Yuki in there... *huggles Ayame* The snake-hugging comment was v. funny! ShixAyaxHa'ri rules!!! All of 'em just kinda bunged together rules!! Slight randomness of fic v. refreshing, and very original fanfic you have here! Enjoyed first chapter immensely!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing On: April 21, 2005 15:00 CDT
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KYAAAAAAAA! You WILL update!! *starts chucking bricks to get you updating* Pweeeeeeeeeeez?!?!?!? *gives you a puppy dog look... sort of*
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