| "Slave Love" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Lil'Lena On: November 23, 2004 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is okay. But, the words you used for the second chapter are noobish! You can improve by reading more lemon fics!
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Reviewed By: Stary Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta do somethin' more interesting. this is really getting stupid so far. read my story and get some ideas.
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Title: Gay!!!!
Reviewed By: yuyuhakgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You stink Yu-Gi-Oh Is GAY!!!!! So is your story!!!
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Reviewed By: cherry-koneko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, sadness!!! I really wanted to see a pro-anzu fic!!! It started out okay, then like you said, you were stuck. Yami/Anzu(Tea) are easier to write in the future. Please don't give up on making a Yami/Anzu ficcie! Or even a Yugi/Anzu fic:) PLEASE??????????????????????????????please?
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Reviewed By: MADDRAGE! On: January 10, 2004 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Fuck this! ur story is *puke* UR MAKIN FUN OF DICKS?? Mind if u see mine? *puts down pants exposing something long and hairy*
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Title: dick????
Reviewed By: papapap On: January 10, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool I love Yami. He could've asked me to suck his dick. Wait he just asked me. *suck*
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
oO weird.... that was just screwed up..especially when Yugi came in....I FELL OFF THE CHAIR LAUGHING MY ASS OFF!!!! i dunno if i should keep laughing or say UPDATE SOON!!!! no seriously update soon!
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Title: PLease write more
Reviewed By: sesshomaruismine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
heh if you cant write anymore than hand the story over to me!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: sesshomaruismine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
update!update !update please! cant live without up datez!!
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Title: KOOOL!
Reviewed By: sesshomaruismine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow , great story. really funny how yami and tea act. love it. write more soon.
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: October 29, 2003 18:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: tea_basher On: October 29, 2003 12:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Where's the Tea bashing?
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