| "A Chance in a Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: bnock On: August 01, 2011 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely think that you should continue this as a story. I have never read a story like this before and would really like to see what happens. |
Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (not signed in) On: November 28, 2004 22:59 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh and suggestions? Well let's see...How about they call and then go down to get their money and just meet each other accidentally. Then maybe they could each do what they had wanted to do but closer together than what they had originally thought. I don't know I'm just trying to be helpful.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox (not signed in) On: November 28, 2004 22:56 EST
Comment/Review:
This is great! Please update. You have wonderful potential and I really think this could be a great fic.
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Title: I have to rewrite
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:43 EST
Comment/Review:
I need to work on this story. I lost the rest of it and I don't remember what happens next. If anyone has any suggestions then please let me know.
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 22:24 EST
Comment/Review:
dude, you gotta update soon, i wanna see what happens!
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Reviewed By: carla On: November 26, 2003 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
came on write i like it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Ericyamaha89 On: October 30, 2003 07:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its a very good fic so please turn it into a story
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Reviewed By: JC On: October 28, 2003 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh sounds good keep it all up.
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