"The Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Shoko(Child of Ice) On: October 18, 2004 00:56 CDT Comment/Review: SWEET. That's the only way I can think to describe it, I'll deffinantly be looking forward to later chapters! This is the first LOZ fic I've ever read and I'm happy to say I'm quite pleased^.^ I'm confused though, DID Link get raped? Or just ALMOST raped? All and all it was a pleasing situation... but if I'd been in Dark Link's position I could have topped his performance*nods assuredly* Which is probably not a good thing... but yes... don't give everything out the first time anyway, then you've got nothing to surprise them with... Bravo! Encore!
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Reviewed By: Flaming Chicken feet of Doom On: August 06, 2004 08:42 CDT Comment/Review: I mean write.
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Reviewed By: Flaming Chicken feet of Doom On: August 06, 2004 08:41 CDT Comment/Review: Right more!
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Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 21:04 CST Comment/Review: I LOVE IT WRITE MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Linut On: March 12, 2004 16:54 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! Wondeful! Beautiful! Excellent! and all other extremely positive adjectives I can think of! :D more soon, I hope?
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Reviewed By: Azrale On: January 29, 2004 21:31 CST Comment/Review: You HAVE to write more! I must know what happens to poor Link! Please, please, please, please update soon!
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Title: OMFG!!! Reviewed By: Somechickonastick On: January 02, 2004 04:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMFG! EEEEEEKKKK!!! *shakes violently and then combusts* I loved it! This story is so great! Oh God... you must update soon. I loved how its written, hardly and grammar/spelling mistakes, which is good ^^ it flowed very smoothly. I need to know what happens next. Now go and update!
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Reviewed By: Ravens Light [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 13:49 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was really good! you should continue. it's definitely worth it. i'll be on the lookout for updates. -R.L.-
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Reviewed By: Yume Katsuragi On: November 20, 2003 15:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is one of the best stories I've ever read! You must write more. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 15:08 CST Comment/Review: Wow...It's really good...I definately think you should continue it...
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Title: Twisted! Reviewed By: suzuka_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 19:47 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a very disturbing story. Well-written though. I'd love to read more of it....helps disturb my fragile psyche, ya know. Great story, keep up the good, but disturbing, work. ^_^
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