| "Indulgence" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: >.
Reviewed By: tamsonight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: NEED MORE! NEED MORE!
Reviewed By: Jane Silver On: November 29, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please say your going to write more! This is a great story and it deserves to be carried on. That and I just want to see what happands to Iason and Riki as they leave the city to make a new life. Do they make it, or are they shot down by oppistion. So please do another chapter. You owe it to your fans to give us some sence of closure. Or just so I can have another Ai No Kusabi story to read. Selfish I know, but thats just the way I am when Ai No Kusabi is involved.
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Reviewed By: capitalist On: September 13, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good, though it definitely seems ooc for Riki. It's slightly AUish, right? Anyway, very poetic description. Iason is just so vulnerable when it comes to Riki!
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Title: SUGOI!
Reviewed By: kikes On: May 12, 2004 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GODS! it's sooooooooo beautiful! this is the ending i love for both of riki and iason. if only..but then you wrote it sooooo damn well! i love it! i love it! thank u for doing this.
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Reviewed By: Jane Silver On: February 27, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, are you going to write another chapter to this? I would really like to see how things work out for them.
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Reviewed By: goku_m On: February 09, 2004 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have rather had an ending in lovemaking and peaceful closeness, than the actual ending of the movies. You did a very good job in describing the feelings in this fic. Maybe a sequel of their new life would be possible?
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Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: December 13, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful Work!!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!!! Please update some more!!!!!!! lauren
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Reviewed By: Jane silver On: November 03, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the mane resion I injoyed this was because it was a new and its so hard to find new stories about this movei. I hope the writer continues because I really want to see what happends.
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