| "The Darkerside of Ryu Hayabusa" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: neveah On: February 13, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a great writer! very creative of how you made ryu's character very obsessive will you write a sequal to this story, because i want to know what happens to ayane and hayate, and what will the feature relationship between ryu and kasumi will be
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Reviewed By: CHAOS X On: September 22, 2004 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please finish,Its been a long while dont you think so??
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Title: can't wait
Reviewed By: soul sword [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 02:24 CST
Comment/Review:
sounds good. hmm, ayane would torture kasumi eh? that sounds pretty nice too. a little more on a serious note, this is a cool fic and i can't wait till the next chapter goes up. unless your computer is as stubborn as mine...
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