| "Rin wrapped in fur" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: -_
Reviewed By: EbonyIvory [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was just "okay". The Japanese/English switch is something we don't take kindly to; it's annoying. Some of us aren't complete Japanese-addicts who know what the Japanese phrases and words mean. We suggest more spaces between your paragraphs to make it easier to read. Otherwise, Sesshoumaru's thoughts were actually funny in some spots. "The other day" becomes "two years ago". That was funny as hell.
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Reviewed By: Ojouchan(logged out) On: October 01, 2004 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
A few spelling errors, but who cares??!?!?!! SO KAWAI!!!!! KAWAI KAWAI!!!! KAWAI!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awh! sesshomaru showing feelings make me feel warm and fuzzy inside! great job!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was really cute. And don't listen to that other reviewer--it's NOT a tail. His fur isn't connected to his backside in any way, shape or form. I did notice one mistake, though. Sess said he never provided "answers to their answeres." I think you meant to say "questions" the second time . . . But it was still really cute. Some things are best left to the imagination ^__^
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Reviewed By: Maiandra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
> Cute.
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Reviewed By: Knight Fox On: February 17, 2004 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Not to sound arrogant but something I've noticed, about Sess's fur is that it's attached to him. I believe it's his tail, but I could be wrong. But think about it, Inuyasha has his ears yet nothing really shows up with Sess except what might be his tail. Just a guess, well written though I think you captured Sess's contemplative side well.
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Title: I like!!
Reviewed By: MintlovesSR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I like!!I like!!I like!!I like!!I like!!I like!!I like!!XD That's soooooo sweet~~~:) When Rin said she wanted to see Kohaku, hahahahaha, Sess's complex feeling was so interesting!! He got uneasy and JEALOUS~~:) Good writting!!!!
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Reviewed By: GreaterBeast_Xellas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii, I loved it ^_^
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