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Reviewed By: i said i'm ALWAYS on but not ALWAYS there. On: June 13, 2005 18:39 CDT
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.....wtf
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: I don't have one On: August 23, 2004 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wish you would get more reviews for this, just as incentive to not stop writing. I'm going to cry if you stop writing this. (As opposed to crying because you're continuing to write this. But I think I'll take that last one over no story at all.) Yes, it's dark, yes, it's kinda of messed up, but some of us thrive on that sort of thing. I'm glad he has Kagome though. It makes it that much sweeter when he's been drug through basically the depths of hell. This is, in it's unique way, a very beautiful story. And makes all sorts of emotions well up inside. I beg you to keep writing, even if I have to find some way to bribe you into not stopping. ^^ inufan@tenthplanetart.com
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 16:51 CST
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Wow! That's one hell of a dark fiction, and even though I'm not partial to male/male...uh "action" I have enjoyed your story every much. I hope that in your next chapter Inu wakes up though. And just a question, how long has Inu been with Kagome (in her time)? Doesn't he heal really quickly? It's just that you haven't given any time references. Oh well, can't wait for your next installment!
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Reviewed By: kagomereborn*notsignedin On: January 07, 2004 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your splenid use of macabe descriptions and tone are wonderful and you should definitely think of writing and publishing some of your work...
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 16, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude all i hav to say is that i pray for your speedy update
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Reviewed By: Ickabod119 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be wonderful to see if inuyasha comes out of your story safe & sound because of the help from Kagome!!! Plus he learns how she needs him & he needs her. Please Post soon.
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god damn you! god damn you to hell!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
>..
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn and i thought i was one sick bitch here. i have finally met my match. not bad, not bad at all.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 14, 2003 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: November 13, 2003 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was beautiful. Hey is this a I/M. There really are not enough of those. Please hurry and update. Im loving this. Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: Ickabod119 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is nice to a fan fic very inuyasha is the one that is broken!!! I hope you contiune to post more of this story soon
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: KenYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great story!! and such a nasty cliffhanger ... I really hope you do post more soon ...;))
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 20:31 CST
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WHAT THE DUCE ! I HATE YOU! UPDATE !!!!! DAMN YOUR INCREDULOUS TYRAINY! HA! * I LOVE FAMILY GUY* ^_^
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