| "To Save The Misfit" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful! It has an interesting and effective start and I love the way that you introduce our little group of characters there (AKA orphen and co.)! Your word usage is interesting too, which also makes this one fun to read ^-^ although I am a little confused… Is Majic part of our little party (AKA with Orphen) …. Or is he as I believed at first (based on the way that you merely stated three of the original four in Orphen's party when bringing them in)… is he the kid? Because it seems as though you just sort of added Majic in there suddenly when you started to use his name, I don't know if that was a change of ideas due to a little while of not writing or if that was because you neglected to state Majic's activity in the group…. Or perhaps I missed it as I do with oh so many things when I read (in which case this review will be mostly just me ranting about something you didn't even do ^^; )…. But other than that slight confusion, I loved reading this, it is a wonderful and interesting story and I would greatly love to see that it is continued! ^-^ (Please? ^-^) thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
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Title: Damn you!
Reviewed By: Taigaa-Gina On: May 16, 2005 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't you even think of stopping now! You better continue this story! I like it and wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue please. do it do it you know you want to do it. Um did that make sense. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue please. I want to know what happens next. I really liked the story. Keep up the good work.
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