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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 20:19 EST
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I've been enjoying this story. I didn't see leaving Naraku to his freed "children" coming, but I sure enjoyed it. My fav pairing has always been Inu/kag, with Sess/kag being a close second. I could even see this going to a Inu/Kag/Sess since everyone seems to agree that brothers can mate the same woman, but could Kagome take it? That remains to be seen. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, ouch, that makes my throat hurt. Don't stop writing, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SCHMOLY THAT WAS GOOOOOOOOOD! Nice job, some grammar errors but I like the orginality. WOO WOO! Go you! Go you, please update that would make me very happy and I saved you to my favorites. I cannot wait for the chapter, Thanks to you, I can escape the world of writing giant chapters taht everyone want right then and there, immediate satisfaction these day...ANywho, good job, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE IT'sSOOOOOOOO GOOOODDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go sesshy and kagome!!! wooooohooo yeah i love the way u make thing they are wonderful and alya is cool!
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Reviewed By: Ishtaral On: February 29, 2004 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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I thought it had a great plot and I just love Ayla she's so cute. I can't wait to see the end results. :)
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Reviewed By: chapter 10 On: February 28, 2004 11:31 EST
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I liked this chapter except for Sesshoumaru getting all mushy at the end. And about last chapter, everything happened in a short time and with not enough details. It was too easy. I can't remember what the pairing was for this fic but I'm cheering for Inuyasha, sorry. jschu25
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Reviewed By: Orb (not online) On: February 27, 2004 23:23 EST
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w00t! update, I'm super sick and watching Inuyasha and coming on and seeing update on some of my fav stories make everything better ^__^. It will be awsum to see Inu and Sess-chan duke it out for Kagome....Unless she leaves *gasps* or picks already dun dun duun!!! O'm shaking with anticipation, please please pleas update as soon as you can its greatly appresiated.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 10:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 17:47 EST
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This was wicked. I hope everyone gets out ok. Naraku is such a bastard. Alya is just like Kagome! it's awsum!!
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Title: This is really good!!
Reviewed By: InuYashaRul3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fanfiction. It's not often that you find a fan fic that has a plot AND it makes sense. IT's good that your not doing one lemon after another, you must be very mature:) Now the only thing that I'm wondering about is how your going to make a threesome between Kagome, InuYasha and Sesshoumaru. I mean, Kagome has a kid now, when I first read that their was a possiblity of a threeway, I thought you were going to make Kagome some kind of whore but she's not. She's very smart and collected. I want one a threeway but how are you going to work it into your story? Please update soon! I'll be looking forward to it!! InuYashaRul3 (I have stories too! Would you please check them out? Thanks!)
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Reviewed By: W.T.P. On: February 17, 2004 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated!! m so happy! ^-^ update soon!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 16, 2004 21:56 EST
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Hi, It's nice to see you alive in the New Year. I'm glad that you are continuing this story. Great chapter ~_~ jschu25
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Reviewed By: Avid Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay your up-dateing again I though you had fallen off the face of the earth or something. This is a really good story . I have a question for you do you take requests? you can E-mail meplease and respond or just tell me no in the next chapter you put up of Shared Hearts thanks ~_~Avid Reader~_~
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 18:25 EST
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This is an awesome story!! I really like how it's all there and its not overly huge. Its totally reader-friendly! It's really cool too. Now I'm all mad cuz Ive been reading it from chapter 1, and i dont have another chapter to go to. UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: niasstyle On: January 13, 2004 15:26 EST
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Your story is excellent but you really need to update. I've been waiting soo long for an update I damn near forgot the story. Please update soon. And if not leave a note so I can stop checking.
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