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Reviewed By: CHIBI METHOS (TO LAZY TO LOG IN) On: December 25, 2003 18:16 EST
Comment/Review:
GOOD STORY. WHERE'S THE REST OF IT?
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Title: OMG GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: japanese_angel12 On: December 24, 2003 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow....i mean wow. i luv ur story. its so different from all the other stories that have inuyasha betraying kagome and she runs into sess...the usual. great twist and storyline. plz update soon. dying to find out more. so pretty pretty plz post up nxt chappie. well newayz awsum fic. i think the story is just great with the way its going.
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Reviewed By: JackoVance On: December 24, 2003 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. Please keep on writing i want to read more.
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Reviewed By: La chief On: December 05, 2003 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Missy-Bee (not logged on) On: November 21, 2003 22:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(claps hands) Very good chapter. I agree there shouldn't be a lemon just yet. Brrr Naraku is so evil trying to turn Ayla against her own mother and father. Tsk. Tsk. Hopefully Fluffy going to hand Naraku's butt over to him. Oh I guess Inuyasha too.
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Reviewed By: sundragon (Not signed on) On: November 21, 2003 12:02 EST
Comment/Review:
No throwing objects at you! I hate it when people do it to me! Love the story! Great chapter! Um... could you add ONE threesome lemon? It just an idea from hentai land! Adios!
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Title: *comes waving with wite flag and empty hands*
Reviewed By: Yumeni, who likes this story so far On: November 21, 2003 07:24 EST
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Look! I won´t throw anything at you!! Dont hurt me! :D I think it is good that you didn´t make it a lemon between them yet. I prefer writers who feels with the characters and not just write what they want. If the later´s the case it often ends up really weird and you read with the feeling that things are wrong and can´t enjoy the fic to the fullest. However I hope that Kagome chooses either Inu or Fluffy, I like them best =^.^= But as I said, I don´t want her to be romanticly involved with any of them until she isn´t mad at them anymore. So a job well done this time also. I´ll be waiting for the next chapter! (I usually don´t rewiev more than one time on each fic, except when I have something important to say, but I will follow this story to the end.)
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 06:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. please update really soon. (you gotta have inu and kag get 2gether, an maybe that 3some you mentioned somewhere along the wey)
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 23:58 EST
Comment/Review:
Lookin Good!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geart chappy. can't wait for the next one. just wondering, but are you going to explain why sesshoumaru wanted kagome with child anytime soon? it's been on my mind since he came looking for her and said she should de 3 months pregnant, anyways. update soon, k!!! -^____^ -W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Coolies...and ya know i'll keep on tellin ya how good this storie is getting till i'm blue in the face or ya finaly end it(wich i pray wont be for a long time)*hugs and kisses*
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 14, 2003 16:08 EST
Comment/Review:
Threesome good idea! Get Her away from Naraku! Love the story! Come on update! Kill naraku! Please! adios
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Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: November 14, 2003 14:52 EST
Comment/Review:
Ha to print out, as i'm reading on the run.. but i KNOW it'll be as good as the rest of your chappies! lookingforward to next chappy!
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 06:48 EST
Comment/Review:
this story is awesome! you have ta update really soon! also, cant wait to see wat you do with the inu/kag/sess pairing... should be very interesting...
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Title: I luv the twist.
Reviewed By: make more On: November 13, 2003 20:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya you should do a dreamy threesome! THAT would be intresting. NO WAIT! You should do a 5-THM! Inu/Kag/San/Mir/Sess. THAT WOULD BE FUN :) Anyway great story.
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