| "Asp" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful
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Reviewed By: Gatta Matta On: November 20, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories!!!! They are just so good. You are one of the BEST Kag/Sess writers I know of. You make it sweet. Ah, the fluff *sigh*. And you don't use the short hand language, which really annoys me in stories (no offense to anyone, but seriously. Example: "OMG," she said. "Grl, dats so gr8 4 U!!" I just can't get the flow of the story, you know?)Twenty out of ten for this story.
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Reviewed By: Gatta Matta On: November 20, 2004 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories!!!! They are just so good. You are one of the BEST Kag/Sess writers I know of. You make it sweet. Ah, the fluff *sigh*. And you don't use the short hand language, which really annoys me in stories (no offense to anyone, but seriously: example "OMG," she said. "Grl, dats so gr8 4 U!!" I just can't get the flow of the story, you know?)Twenty out of ten for this story.
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Reviewed By: Gatta Matta On: November 20, 2004 14:51 CST
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I LOVE your stories!!!! They are just so good. You are one of the BEST Kag/Sess writers I know of. You make it sweet. Ah, the fluff *sigh*. Twenty out of ten for this story.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 17, 2004 22:28 CST
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Awwww! That's so sweet! It's wonderful to finish reading a story with a big, goofy grin on your face, so thank you so much for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet! i loved reading every moment of it! You did a great job!
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Reviewed By: Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:46 CST
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Title: Asp
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: November 05, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Slight grammar problems, but a great short story!
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Title: Sniff
Reviewed By: Youkai Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so kawaii! I loved it! Oh, Sessho is so sweet, and Kagome being mute was a good idea. I loved it, again-but it's the truth! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel {Sesshyangel@aol.com} On: October 31, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, dang it! I should have known that it was extremely long for a reason. I thought it was another chapter story! Not a one-shot. I really got to pay attention to those things. If you get enough reviews, will you continue? I rather liked how they got together. You know, I thought that you were going to make the reason Sesshou hated his father was because he sent her away. But this fic is quite original, so you didn't even follow the conventional plot of having Sesshou hate his father and the rest of his family. What was the purple flame that shot out as lightning? Was it really her power? Why, if it was, did it manifest in the way it did? From what I can tell, it seems as if that is how she got her powers. IS that so?
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Title: *melts*
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww - this was such a cute story! One of the best shorts I've ever read!
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally loved this! one of the best one shots i have ever read.
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