| "I'll Help Dry Your Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 01:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this has got to be one of the best comfort-sex lemons I've read... very sweet, very emotional; I was almost moved to tears. I salute you, good sir.
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Title: Bittersweet Comfort
Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's very cool that you wrote about the comfort of pain. Sometimes it'll take everything to comfort the worst pain.
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Reviewed By: D69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goog u should do a sequle
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Title: Awww how sweet
Reviewed By: Konous the Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, your style is very unique and I enjoyed how emotional this story was. I mean it seems like to me this story shows just how beautiful sex can be between two people. Very good job sir, I hope to see more work like this. Signed, Konous the Grey
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Reviewed By: Nowhere man On: December 30, 2003 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...despite the ass-ness that is hank in all those other reviews, I do believe this was a nice attempt. Would like to see more of this story if its possible. Also the comment of the beta reader is quite true, saw a few errors as well.
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Title: Spiffy fic ^_^
Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul On: November 10, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty spiffy fic there. ^_^ I enjoyed it muchly, though I noticed you had some spelling errors and inconsistencies throughout the fic. Might I suggest finding yourself a beta-reader to read over your works before you post them to catch any mistakes? I have one myself and it's quite a nice deal. ^_^ Also, you did not account for Asuka's whereabouts during this whole thing. I kept expecting her to pop into the room at any moment. ^^;; Anyway, other than those two details, the fic was great and I'm looking forward to reading more from you soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Hank124 On: November 02, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story want more misato/shinji! Now! Just kidding, well good story and i hope to see more from you soon.
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