| "Keep That In Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: EllyYuki On: May 07, 2012 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I cried so much. Not Duo dammit! ;__; I'm still crying. I've been over it a few more times to see since when he died and what part of the conversation was imagined by Heero. I think somewhere after the last couch. Probably after Heero put him on his back or something. Ah no, right after the 'Keep that in mind' probably. Because he had hugged Heero around the shoulders a last time. This is just another blow to the stomach really. And now I've got to try to sleep too. ><
I love your writing style a lot. I don't even remember how many times I've re-read Freeport and Diplomatic Relations. I'm now going through your archives reading everything you have. Be prepared! |
Reviewed By: Taigne On: August 13, 2005 23:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it, just fantastic. Oh god, but that was so good.
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Reviewed By: PuppetJulia On: March 06, 2005 23:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just thought I'd let you know that this fic made me cry. Sweet Jesus, man, I... God, that was good.
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Title: Oh my God
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: May 07, 2004 12:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi... when i started to read the fic... i think that Heero is the one who dies. But when i reach the part when they tell him that Duo is already dead and that he has been dead by a long time... i start to cry like Maria Magdalena... oh my God that was so sad... i readit three days ago. And i read it 4 more times and each time i cry and cry... each time oh i cant describe my feelings well... so this is what i wanted to tell you... i think that the really great authors are the ones who can make the reader to feel, to see and almost to touch what was within the lines... You are a great author... really... there is no more to tell... oh yeah keep writting like this... ah and you say your fic was not good... well hugs and kisses from Mexico i_love_duo_maxwell@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: kilp On: January 17, 2004 06:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was suprised to see your story up again, good story I love it. Sad and funny.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 03:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best deathfics I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 18, 2003 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent and lovely.
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 00:12 EST
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ah man...*sniffle* I knew it was coming, but still...that just sucked! v.vV I, too, have been forced to write a deathfic I never intended to, thanks to a rabid plot bunny that wouldn't leave me alone until I'd written two chapters, both over fifteen pages in word, of a fic I have yet to finish now...grr.. lol I really loved this fic, though. It was funny in parts, not too dark or angsty, etc., like some deathfics tend to get. Dark Duo humor is always fun, too. ^_~ Anyways, hopefully that particular plot bunny will leave us *both* alone now! ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: tucan greg On: November 01, 2003 15:52 EST
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that was fucking crazy but i loved every minute of it
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