| "A Promise To Keep" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: skuam On: April 01, 2004 01:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Lovely, really lovely. Please, write more I just adore this couple and can't have enough of them... oh! by the way You don't suck ^^
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Reviewed By: Ravens Light [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... kawaii! they're so adorable! write more, write more!
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Title: The Kiobito Thenshi of Shinigami
Reviewed By: Thorn the Broken Tenshi On: December 03, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. it was cute. However I was looking for a lemon story this is cute. One thing though you should try the wrting style where you change with each paragraph. reading POV's is boring and does nothing. Thanks for writing it. Please do More. ////_^
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