| "Way Back When" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 10:29 CST
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i really really really really like this story. please please please please please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: July 09, 2005 01:59 CDT
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It's a shame you're on hiatus, because this is a very nice story! If there were more, I'd be completely willing to beta it for you (my address is gabgirl209@aol.com). Even if you never conclude this story, I hope any other writing projects you have will be fruitful. You have much talent!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:49 CDT
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i like your story. i havent read something like this before, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: bluu moo On: August 11, 2004 08:45 CDT
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Where to start. I couldn't get past the first chapter. I don't like it. There are so many Kag is in school, blah blah stories out there. You would think by now someone could come up with a better idea. I have to go brush my teeth and get the bad taste out of my mouth that your story left behind. Come up with an original idea.
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Reviewed By: archergurl713 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 19:00 CDT
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please update!!!!! this is sooooo good!! i really want to know what happens next!!!! just one question, how come Kag doesn't know how to ride a horse? i know it makes it all the more interesting, but still - even I know how to ride, and thats saying something! update soon please! ::cute face::
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 08:14 CDT
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Wow long time since you've updated. But I like the way this chapter ended. I think sango should get a good punch in the face tho. hope you update sometime this year :)
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Reviewed By: Sakura1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 08:09 CST
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:) As much I would like to take credit htat I am in this fic I'm not. Infact I am in no way in this fic. I decided to place other original characters from my other fics into this fic thank you very much. Please unless you have any thing nice to say leave me be.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (not logged on) On: February 28, 2004 12:18 CST
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YAY! U updated! Wonderful job, update soon!
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Reviewed By: flamekitten19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 16:47 CST
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i'm sorry for my last review. that was totally out of line.i dont take flames very well
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Reviewed By: flamekitten19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhhhhmmmmm.what can i say?u trashed my fic so i thought i'd read one of yours and all in all it stinks.i couldn't even get past the first chapter. so i will quote you in saying "In fact, delete the whole thing. You'll be sparing poeple from reading it
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Reviewed By: sabriel7(not logged on) On: January 31, 2004 10:47 CST
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AND IT'S NOT INU/KIK YAAAAY!!!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (not logged on) On: January 31, 2004 10:46 CST
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YAY! I love the new chappy! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 23:21 CST
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YAY! I was hoping it wasn't Inu/Kik, KIKYO IS SUCH A BITCH! Sorry, excuse my language, but I HATE her! Anyway, wonderful story so far! Update soon!
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Title: CONTINUE
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
my ideas for fluff are largly limited since I don't even know when Inuyasha will come into the story but one idea (it doesnt sound good but with some funny dialogue it could) is that he asks her if she is a witch she gets pissed tells him theres no such thing and gets scared asks her what the hell she is bla blah blah...Now I'm chatering. I think it could be good tho...
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Reviewed By: Sessy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! this is great! Update soon, im seriously getting into your stry! lol
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: January 28, 2004 19:04 CST
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hey how come it said u updated and u didn't??
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: January 28, 2004 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is good, and I cant wait to see what happens next. If its the same idea as "Fireflies in the dark", then I think I will. I loved that story and was also soooo sad when no more were going to come. Kagome was a captive!!!! Soooo good..*begins to weep uncontrollably remember she wont see the end* At least I can imagine Inu and Kag getting together. *looks at you and growls* You better not do that to me or your dead! You got that DEAD!!! So, I hope you right...and don't listen to some bitchy reviews. *glares at the one she's talking about* Don't listen to them. Listen to ME! And I say Update!
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: how boring
Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:33 CST
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wow..how bad this is. and you think MY fic was bad.....THis fic is good..for putting someone to sleep. I started yawning after getting thru the first few paragraphs. Try wrting something INSTERESTING
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Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make them wake up in each other arms. so far the story is great.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:24 CST
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OOOOOOUUU!!!! ohhh man this is REALLY good!!!! i love this story! *smiles shyly* i think ur a good author. i like this set up! ive never seen this kind of fanfiction b4! u kno how it always seems like every1's always coping sombody elses ideas so GOOD JOB!! *gives u some kandy* if u update ill...give u a kookie ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sirista On: December 11, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is wow... very unique and definitely enjoyable to read. Ne, fluff? Simple stuff would be like a gentle brush of the hand, heated arguments- with double meanings attached, catching 'prey'- Where the guy or girl runs after the other to catch them, soft caresses to sensitive areas- the belly, upper arm, neck; heated watching, ^.^;;; I guess you could probably turn anything into a bit of fluff if you think about it. I'm sure you could do it... after all sometimes it's the simple things that work best.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon Keiri On: December 06, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv the fic! You should put it up on fanfiction, I know you'd get a lot of reviews. PLZ UPDATE SOON! P.S Is Sesshomaru, Naraku, the Shikon no Tama and Rin gonna be in this?
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Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 17:39 CST
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aw it is so cute! WRITE MORE, PLEASE? bump bump! :-D
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 24, 2003 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: lysel2 On: November 02, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the witch thing and indian them talking was funny please write more please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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