| "naked and alone" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it there were a few spelling mistakes but we all make those and yes make a sequeal i love this story its one of my favorites!!!!!!!!! keep writing
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: inusbabygrl On: December 04, 2003 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i would like it if u made a sequel to your story, it was very good
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMIko(not signed in) On: December 04, 2003 04:22 CST
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hey A_T! say hi 2 Fuki-ti for me!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMIko(not signed in) On: December 04, 2003 04:21 CST
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ummmm... i didn't really understand the part with them meeting in the sky... was it like Kagome got hit by a car and died then went up into the sky and Inuyasha met her there and they went 2 the past and had a baby???? is that it?
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 02, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got to update
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 02, 2003 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
You got to update
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 10:17 CST
Comment/Review:
O.o Wwwwwhhhhhhooooooaaaaaaa... I just thought of a really really vile "What if". What if the hanyou that Kikyo told Kagome that Kagome was pregnant with their child was Naraku. EeEEEEeeeeeeeeeEEEEeeewwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWwwww!!!!! >.< WRONG!!!! Any way, I really really hope it is Inuyasha's child................ GROSS!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 19, 2003 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, i just read chapter 3 and it's good. Few spelling errors, lot of OOC:nes but this is good.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
are u sure ur name's kagome? it's shikon no tama not shikon on toma. i like update!
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Title: I don't want to be naked an alone eaither
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:P I hope the next chapter is sad...I like sad
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Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:37 CST
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It took my whole day to read this I hope your Happy! With all the awful spelling and Sh*T I had to go through . . . I really enjoyed the story and since no matter what I read I review it . . it was worth my day Loved IT! O_O! Read my story The swtching lOve demon I think you'd enjoy that! ^_^ Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Macy Gray On: November 06, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I know I liked this and your other story. Unusal plot but a good read. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 21:08 CST
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You misspelled Sesshomaru. It is either Sesshomaru or Sessho-maru. His nicknames as Sesshie, Sess, Sessi, Fluffy, or Sessho-sama.
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 00:07 CST
Comment/Review:
great story so far. i can't wait until your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanna say this before I start to get to far into this story, I have only read the first chapter. WOW!!! I love this story! I cannot wait to read more!!!! *goes back to reading*
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