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Reviewed By: Hell-o On: March 29, 2005 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Shrine is spelles shRine not shine
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Title: sp?
Reviewed By: KaloBagh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offense but your spelling for some characters is wrong. Fluffy's name is Sesshomaru and it's Shikon No Tama not shikon no toma. It Kaede not Keade. Plz don't take this as a flame just as a little advice... Anya
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Reviewed By: UnKnown User [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 10:12 CDT
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Hey read the summary not the story but I think you mean Shrine. and it's a well house that's abandoned. She lives in the actually shrine. Well not really but it's closer than you think. Love you and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so kewl and so totally needs a sequal hope you decide to write one and I louv operatoin sex too....I luv all of yur work that i've read accually^^
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Reviewed By: kogathewolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the absolute best fan fic i have ever read. it was the closest one so far to actually bring me onto the verge of tears. and thats a pretty big thing since i havent cried for about 4 years. o and please do start a sequel when you have the time. o and what was that sakura thing all about i dont get it. o and one more thing that i just have to say. when i first read this it felt like somebody was typing about my life. well on the being alone issues anyways. i dont know why i just said this. it might be the fact that it 2:30 in the morning and ive had a lot of caffine today. hell i probably wont even remember this tommorrow. well like i said before great story.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so that was wicked cute and sad, and ooh I loved it! Please write a sequal ^_^
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are my mentore!!!!!!!:D
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it there were a few spelling mistakes but we all make those and yes make a sequeal i love this story its one of my favorites!!!!!!!!! keep writing
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: inusbabygrl On: December 04, 2003 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
i would like it if u made a sequel to your story, it was very good
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMIko(not signed in) On: December 04, 2003 04:22 CST
Comment/Review:
hey A_T! say hi 2 Fuki-ti for me!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMIko(not signed in) On: December 04, 2003 04:21 CST
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ummmm... i didn't really understand the part with them meeting in the sky... was it like Kagome got hit by a car and died then went up into the sky and Inuyasha met her there and they went 2 the past and had a baby???? is that it?
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 02, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got to update
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 02, 2003 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
You got to update
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 10:17 CST
Comment/Review:
O.o Wwwwwhhhhhhooooooaaaaaaa... I just thought of a really really vile "What if". What if the hanyou that Kikyo told Kagome that Kagome was pregnant with their child was Naraku. EeEEEEeeeeeeeeeEEEEeeewwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWwwww!!!!! >.< WRONG!!!! Any way, I really really hope it is Inuyasha's child................ GROSS!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 19, 2003 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, i just read chapter 3 and it's good. Few spelling errors, lot of OOC:nes but this is good.
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