| "Just One Night Out" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Blah.
Reviewed By: Mudkip [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't hate you. I hate most ppl. But I don't hate you. You are a good writer. I hate me, I am not a good writer. I don't hate you.
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Title: Just One Night Out
Reviewed By: blazeburst On: April 16, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
need's to be sexier
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
This was really good! I think Robin and Raven make a really good couple. I just wish that you would write what happened to Beast Boy and Starfire! Oh well. Great story anyways, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: SamusAran of SR388 On: February 26, 2004 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! I've got an idea for a sequal to this...have raven and robin as well as starfire and beastboy get married (before raven gives birth of course) and have the Justice League be the audience and cyborg be the dude who does the uh..."I now pronounce you man and wife, you may now kiss the bride".
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Reviewed By: Cyko On: February 24, 2004 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story, very original indeed. The way you detail the emotions of the characters is indepth and realistic. Most readers should be able to relate to the characters, and the emotions they were going through were generally adolescent, heh. And if you initially started writing this with just watching one episode, I give you some credit. Since with just one show you had most of the characters personalities correct. One issue I saw was that when Starfire emotions changed. Because she came to the conclusion that she wouldnt give up on Robin, then went out with B.B. and forgot about Robin. For any other stories you write in the future beware of quick focus change of characters especially if it is a major focus like being in love. Overall, I really enjoyed it. I was looking at some other stories of TT but it is hard to find one without little plot and alot of sex. I know you hinted at it but that was a good twist to your ending. For future story ideas..umm..let me think. Well, if you liked writing about the Ten Titans...maybe a sequel to this, like 10 years or so in the future from where you last left off...I dunno. Well hope to read more stuff from you soon. Gives me something to enjoy in between classes. -One love, One Respect, Cyko
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Reviewed By: Will p. On: February 16, 2004 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally I liked this fic because I think Raven & Robin would make a better Couple Than Raven & BB or Robin & starfire
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Reviewed By: batosi the man slayer On: January 10, 2004 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man where is the rest i want more i need another chapter please give me another chapter. what ever happen to star fire and beast boy. that had to be the shorters love scene i have ever seen in my life p.s. How old are you and where you come up with does smart words.
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Reviewed By: David F On: November 12, 2003 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
If I had a dime for every time I've been in that situation myself…whatever. The point is like it or not, to peruse someone else that's in love with someone is wrong. The only time I can justify stealing a lover is when that couple's love is one-sided or already dead. Still regardless of the reasons and justifications one can come up with stealing is stealing and it is wrong from a moral standpoint. I hate sounding like I'm contradicting myself but love is love and it makes those full of life crazy. Great fic, I just wish you ended it when Raven and Robin first kissed.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story! Update! Oh, I have a few questions. How old are they in the fic? How close will they get?
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 03, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I think Raven and Robin should become a real couple in this story!
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