Reviewed By: ! On: February 24, 2004 16:10 CST
Comment/Review:
You know, what you wanted to prove would have work better if it was a true story. but now what you have written it just another one of those 'Bashing of MS fiks'. That doesn't prove anything except that, at the end Mary Sue are great to make fun off. But I understant what you are trying to do although for me its too late. I am staying clear of them. Good Story.
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