| "Trials and Tribulations" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: daichi kaido On: December 16, 2003 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are SATAN! how could you do this!?!?! NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought taiyou was bad enough. then you have to go and do this? with kairi! no. she's mine. and sora is riku's. GRRRRR!!!!!! write more and remmedy this. or just plain write more. i, the melevolent underware monkey, demand it. or i'll santch your underware damnit. and i'll run off with kairi. i swear! i will totally genk her from the concert and you will never see her again! okay, that's it. i'm done now.
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Reviewed By: yamichaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
*hides her shot gun and coughs* well yah, you pretty much had me screaming bloody murder at Kairi and woke up my parents, but that's okay as long as there will be some RikuxSora later. Keep writing! I'm still supporting you!
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Reviewed By: rissa On: December 05, 2003 05:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though i don't usually enjoy reading things about yaoi relationships i ABSOLUTELY enjoyed this one! the relationship that broke apart with sora and riku actually made my heart shatter. it made me relate to real life in way way. and i can realate to how sora felt when he was hurt like that, u know feeling alone in the world. but on the other hand, THIS STORY WAS KICK-ASS!
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Reviewed By: yamichaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 01:00 CST
Comment/Review:
erk! *falls down twitching* why of all places did you put a cliffie there?! rawr! Kyro: *throws cold water on her* e.e update soon or fell my wrath! Kyro: i think what she ment to say was she loves your story
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Reviewed By: Karna On: November 29, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're good.....ever consider directing soap-oeras or writing a book?
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 29, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update and special thanks. I do want to see riku and sora end up together though. Please update soon.
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Title: Uh... you're not finished...
Reviewed By: AOTS On: November 23, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinkblink* Um... you're not done hun, *picks up her whip* Get back to work! Kimajime: *grabs onto her arm* AOTS... *shakes his head with disappointment* You have too much sugar in your system again...
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 22, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE I WANNA SEE AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YaisaKitty On: November 21, 2003 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe... I like I like... a dumbstruck Riku isn't somethin' ya see everyday ^^ Wonder how he's gonna handle Sora's distrust of his motives... I can't wait for the next chappie o^_^o
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Title: Good Good!
Reviewed By: Rinni On: November 21, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oiee! *Pokes* Nice work! I love your story! Its soo cute and the style is great. Lets see the next chapter!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Seya On: November 20, 2003 02:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this it's a great story can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Title: wowness
Reviewed By: yamichaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! i love the way you portray Sora and Riku. The emotions and style. I simply love it to death. Please continue writing, i'm supporting you all the way! *gives you a cookie*
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Reviewed By: YaisaKitty On: November 11, 2003 20:59 CST
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*fangirl hop* This has a great start ^^ I can't wait for the next chappie ^^.... -^_^- ehehe I wuv this fic already!
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