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Title: Awesome Work!
Reviewed By: Rinni On: January 26, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! Just one more chapter! I should've reviewed every chapter you did. >.< The style and creativity is all so good, all orginal! Very good work, the emotion you captured, and made the story full of bumps, because life is never without bumps, eh? Keep up the good work! *Power punch #5* p(^.^)p
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Title: Awesome Work!
Reviewed By: Rinni On: January 26, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! Just one more chapter! I should've reviewed every chapter you did. >.< The style and creativity is all so good, all orginal! Very good work, the emotion you captured, and made the story full of bumps, because life is never without bumps, eh? Keep up the good work! *Power punch #5* p(^.^)p
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Reviewed By: Allieyjo On: December 11, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, that was a great chapter. i do have one complaint/request though. plz don't put the next one in italics. my eyes were almost crossed from reading it. lol, i can't wait to find out how all of the things get finallized cuz they were kinda resolved @_@ (that made no sense). sorry it took me so long to read this, but school's being a butthole and finals just suck. i love how you've written Ryo and i'm so glad you updated even if it took like forever. =D hope you get the next chapter out soon and we finally get to see what happens at those parties. hehehehe
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Title: Dambi diddie
Reviewed By: Kei.yuki On: November 29, 2004 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very dramatic without being overly so. It's not quite easily realistic, but it's at the point that it would be hard to say that it wasn't realistic..... I wish to see more!
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Title: ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MERCURYGODDESS HERE! On: November 20, 2004 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
MEDIAMINER COMPLETELY SCREWED MY CHAPTER UP!!! I AM GOING TO TRY TO GET THIS FIXED, AND I APOLOGIZE FOR THE INCONVIENCE! IF MEDIAMINER KEEPS ACTING STUPID, THEN GO TO FANFICTION.NET UNDER MERCURYGODDESS AND A PERFECT CHAPTER WILL BE THERE!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakayume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 00:39 CST
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Yeah, it seems like quite a few of the words were cut off; there was a lot missing. I could only read bits and pieces of it.
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Title: I'm not sure..
Reviewed By: Silveriss On: November 16, 2004 10:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not entirely sure but it seems like some of your formatting was destroyed on mediaminer. There just seems to be something choppy and missing about this latest chapter. it also has none of the same formatting of your previous chapters. This bothers me the most because I've been looking forward to reading this chapter for so long now. anyway, you mentioned something about a fanlist or the like. My e-mail is chjburke@yahoo.com. I would like to join. Thank you.
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Title: Yeah a new chapter
Reviewed By: Alliey jo On: August 30, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah you updated. Sorry i didn't get to read it sooner though, my monitor had a board fry n it or something like that when my house got hit by lightning. Scary i know. anyways, i'm completly stoked that you updated but you know how people are we still want more!!!! so please try and get the next one out asap. Now that i know there's going to be a trilogy, it's harder to wait for the next one cuz i know it's coming. It's like the nigth before Christmas, you know your about to get presants in like 6 hour and that just seems like for ever when your like 6 or 7. Umm sorry bout all the babbling in this one. Oh and i like the way that kiari took the whole riku and sora thing. It shows how her character has grown, and gives her more of a dept then the game ever did. Go You!!!!! K well i'm gonna go bug somebody else with my ramblings. hehehehe.
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Title: Groovy!
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, once more, you satisfy my Sora/Riku hunger, Mercury Goddess for tonight! Ooooohhh, the "talk" is soon coming, eh? This ought to be intresting... thanks for the update! You've been kinda busy, huh? Well, keep up the fantastic work and we all shall be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! -Echan2
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Reviewed By: shady gurl On: August 23, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know whats really fun at parties?... t&d of course!
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Reviewed By: shady gurl On: August 10, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please please update!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Alliejo On: August 06, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is no other word for it. WOW. that's what your story is. you just keep your readers mesmarized (spelling?) by this very realistic and just astonishing story. i love the idea about going through the rest of his high school years. gives hope for the future. I really do love the caracter of Taiyou because you wanna be like grrrrrrr just let Riku and Sora be together but at the same time you don't want him to have to be hurt cuz he really is a good guy and human in a way because/despite his past mistakes. okay i'm done babbaling now and i really really really hope you update soon so. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. the suspense is kiling me.
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Title: GASP.
Reviewed By: Sakayume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, I can't believe Riku hit him! Poor, poor Sora. I don't suppose it was all that surprising, though. Considering... Okay. It was surprising. Really. But, yeah... Absolutely amazing, that chapter was. ^^ As soon as I finished reading it (which, I must say that reading the last bit was difficult, as shocked as I was), I sat on my bed and stared at the wall for a good 20 minutes. Then I had to read over it again to be sure I didn't imagine reading that. *laughs* Like I said before, I love all the twists you've worked into your fic. Keep up the great work! ^^
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Title: Bloody Hell!!!
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You NEVER cease to amaze me, darlin'. everything you write is immediate gold and it's so intresting to read and get enraptured by it. *sigh* Poor Sora though... what made you think of the last name Miyazaki? Just popped out of no where? Yeah, the whole fight kinda shocked me and I was staring at my screen for a good four minutes just so I could finish the fic! Does Riku realize how much Sora loves him? The angst is absolutely killing me. But the emotions and feelings from each character is special in their own way. Taiyou is confused and Kairi is more than shocked. I do hope Riku is okay... even though he was mean to my little Sora-kun. ^^ All in all, great chapter! Continue at your own pace and we shall be waiting! -Echan2 ^_~
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Reviewed By: yaoifangirl On: June 23, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is the first R/S fanfic I've ever read that had a story plot! It's amazing! Please continue the story!!! ^_______^ two thumbs up!! Your story is my favorite R/S fanfic now!!
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