"The Shadow Fox Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 03, 2005 11:19 CDT Comment/Review: Interesting fic. It is funny and has the mood of mystery hanging around it. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: July 03, 2004 14:20 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was good -- I enjoyed it! I can't wait to find out what happens...update quickly!!! And keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Uh... who cares?... Just Kidding Reviewed By: Sabs On: December 30, 2003 14:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have a wonderful friend. ... *cough cough* Yeah. I like the Yomi/Kiko (who cares about sp?) best. Even though Yomi's a goat. You know why. :-) Rightio. Nice chapter! Interesting and suspenseful and all that! Just a side note-- the plurals are slightly off. Maybe Sue needs to concentrate more? JK! -Sabs
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover On: December 06, 2003 19:25 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! i want to read more!! i may be REALLY far off on this but is Kiko Kurama's sister or, something? Anyway please keep writing this story
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:48 CST Comment/Review: Oh now that was a great vhapter!! I loved it!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: koto On: November 29, 2003 11:54 CST Comment/Review: old goat lol
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Title: Yuppers Reviewed By: Sabs On: November 23, 2003 19:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: See.... I review your stuff while I'm supposed to be working on my calendar project. But as usual, it amazes me how you show off the character's personalities so well without having too much of an author's narration. *shakes head at self* I can't do that. I have way too much boring author narration. See what I mean? TOTS
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Title: Goat Reviewed By: Sabs On: November 23, 2003 19:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Stoopid six-eared goat. Yes, the two 'oo's count. Weirdest thing. Heh. *shakes head* Anyhow, characterization is awesome because you show exactly how the stuff is... err... (I'm confusing myself) .... Well, how they talk show what kind of people they are. Awesome job. TOTS
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Title: Interesting Reviewed By: Sabs On: November 23, 2003 19:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Interesting, and so darn funny. That is, until you get to the 'lime-ish' parts. Ugh. How on earth do you write slash without puking? TOTS Awesome.
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Title: Pointless spot Reviewed By: Sabs On: November 23, 2003 19:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome. Who is the girl? lol Hey, suspense goes Whee! The rating- it's just because *sneer* You're my friend. JK. It was awesome.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 21:05 CST Comment/Review: I find this very interesting!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 15:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is interesting. I wonder who that girl is though? Hmm Update soon!!
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