| "God’s Last Name Isn’t ‘Damnit’" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: angelbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you seriously done with this story. I see it has been awhile since your latest update. Please, please don't leave it there. This is far to good. You know that right. You must update. Please.
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Title: No! No! No!
Reviewed By: Leland's girlfriend On: December 03, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you! don't leave us on a cliff hanger! I want to know what happenes between Yugi and Yami! Very cool though, making Yugi a stripper I mean. Good work but damn it update!
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Reviewed By: dark selene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! WHEN R U GONNA UPDATE? I'm waitin! It isn't nice to keep ppl waitin!! I wanna c what happens next and I'll aprecciate if u don't put a cliffhanger in the next chapter oki? n_u
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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
FYI: Saffron comes from the stamens of the crocus. Saffron is YELLOW, no matter what color the petals of said crocus may be. So you've basically said Yugi's eyes are purple, then yellow. Also? Lose the damned author's notes in the text. If you MUST comment, do it at the beginnning/end of the story (and separate it from the text, so those not interested can skip it easily). Nothing ruins a scene's mood faster than the writer sticking her nose in to make insipid comments on the scene she's writing.
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Reviewed By: Noooooooo On: November 04, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did not just stop there, no you didn't, oh my gosh, you did, you are so evil, and you know that you know that you need to continue this, don' t you. don't even play like you don't ok, so I will be waiting for an update,k.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: BakurasAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and very good! I can't wait for the next chapter. If you have any extra time read one of my stories. I have alot of em.
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