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| "Insert Cool Yu-Gi-Oh! Related Title" Reviews/Comments [ 313 ] | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not signed in? O.o) On: February 25, 2005 09:37 CST
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WAII!!!!! You updated! FINALLY!! hooray!!! I loved this chapter, I really did ^^;;. It was just so..amusing! And I still feel bad for Jonouchi. And this is still one of my favorite stories. I really liked the part where Jonouchi started thinking about ninjas..and where Bakura taunts Yami about what he does with Yugi o.o. This story is just so damn funny! I can't wait to see what the gang does to Jonouchi *sweatdrops* poor him. Oh, and I really wanna kill Anzu, heh. And I really hope you update soon! And..I hope your farm is doing alright o.o. What a random job to have XD. Have fun with that!
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 08:52 CST
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Right...its actually time to review your chapter. I often get so caught up in writing other stuff I get sidetracked and forget to do this. This chapter was so damn funny, I couldn't stop laughing at it. I have two fave moments in this one firstly Jou's ninja sketch I could just see that one actually happening, I mean come on Kaiba has whatever he wants why not clothes retriving ninjas....not to mention i'll take a ride in his car anytime grr baby! lol My second fave part was Bakura's and Yami's fight...they sounded like proper two year olds! I could just see it in my mind Bakura yelling "COCKSUCKER" and then Yami yelling back "How dare you?!" while Yami was thinking 'Oh my god how does he know, I can't let him think i'd get on my knees infront of anyone...Yugi wouldn't have told him...did Ryou tell him...oh my ra Yugi told Ryou who told Bakura whose know telling me that he knows...noooo!' and then Yami turing round to Yugi and yelling "How could you Yugi".....erm i kinda went off on one there sorry about that. Anyway all of it was a great piece of comedy and can't wait to see what you do next Velvetina xx
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 08:46 CST
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and how did you get such a totally random job, sounds cool though! The next chappie sounds tres cool but...sadly its the end of this arc! eeek its crazy i tell you crazy...yay Kaiba/Jou....you know what i like *wink* *wink* lol. Although I have to admit the question on my mind...and most likely everyone elses is 'will Bakura ever get some?!' lol I hopeyou make him wait untill the next arc though that would just be so funny! Geez you sound so damn busy..crazy stuff. My life is very very very very very very and i mean VERY dull at the moment...'m not writing cos i have a block, men suck and college is such a drag, I'd rather be...well who knows but i'd rather be doing something...wait i know reading this fic all over again for what has got to be the millionth time :-) Goovey my email is Kittenbelle@hotmail.com you can also find it on my writers profile thingy...I think. Gmail sounds groovey I read about it and then managed to forget about it *smacks head* duh!
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 08:45 CST
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Hey there! I'm on the doom saga still! We've just got to the part where Seto and Yami are duelling Dartz and he's shown the Atlantis and Rafeal has just lost his soul....I feel well sorry for him now i know his story...oh and when Joey lost his soul I actually sobbed, yes you heard me sobbed!!! Grand Prix?! Fruity guy?! yawadda?! Yay egyptain saga I've totally been dying to see that even if Seto does get a loev interest...or thats what I've heard some girl called Kiasara...or something like that. I warn you that you may get a few mean comment about her in future reviews. is Dobora Thief Bakuaras first name...how groovey and yay for him being eveil, I've seen like soo many pics that I'm dying to know his story for real. I'm all excited now, spesh since Maliks comeing back...maybe for a short while but who gives a damn I get to see him again weeeeeeeee! yeah what I'm gonna do is write down a load of manga names and go order them off Amazon, may cost me lotsa money in the end but it'll be worth it, I will not be stopeed mwahaha. "Cool YuGiOh! Related Title Inserted" eek but its so similar...I'm never gonna get it....wait a sec you're on my faves list so i'll just be able to click on you! Ha you can't trick me taht easily. Although i have to admit it IS the perfect follow up after this title. Can't wait for the next chapter, I hope that its up soon although I do understand your reasons for taking a while this time, btw what city have you moved to? and how did you get such a total | Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 03:47 CST
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Thank Ra, you've updated! I was beginning to think this was yet another fic that was abandoned... for some reason there seem to be a lot of those! And many of the abandoned ones are good ones too... *sighs* Oh well. This was such a cute chapter! Yugi and Yami getting so embarrassed thanks to Bakura and Honda being rude and crude. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter though... Kaiba/Jou pairing is my fav! They're so much fun to write... they're just so explosive together! I wrote a couple... well, a couple Seto/Joey fics, and a few others as well that aren't YuGiOh! related. If you ever get the chance, check them out! I know you're busy... but I just can't wait for the next chappie! Update soon, ok?
| Title: where are you???
Reviewed By: euphoria On: February 16, 2005 22:45 CST
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Hey, it's been awhile since your last chapter and i'm beginning to go through withdrawel. I've managed to read the story over twice, and my favorite chapters/parts like 70,000 times, you have to update soon. I've turned into a story druggie!!! I'm not to pleased with that fact, but I definitely need my next "hit". Wow, i've never done a drug metaphor before, I think I should quite trying. Update soon!!! (As in now please)
| Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: lord of idiots On: February 02, 2005 20:47 CST
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update soon. PLEASE!
| Reviewed By: KaibasNymph [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 11:16 CST
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I finally fixed my computer and got to catch up on my favorite fics and of course i read this one first well update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!!
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 12:30 CST
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Oi *POKE* what happened to your plan hey? aww come on you simpley have to update, I'm dying with suspence because you havn't updated. Come on pretty please with cherries ontop..or whatever you fancie ontop just update pweeese!
| Title: Heh heh...cool.
Reviewed By: Melissa Penwrym On: December 07, 2004 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a Ryou fish too. Its very cute, and he isnt spastic like yours. It even has two brown dots on his head that looks like eyes. Anyway, I was watching Yu-Gi-Oh yesterday, and Ryou and Bakura was on, and those voices made me soooo damn...um...heh, lets just say the lemons in this story are being put to good use, and leave it at that. Loves ya work, byes! Love Melissa.
| Title: BEGGING!
Reviewed By: id On: November 22, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, UPDATE BEFORE THE END OF THE MONTH! PLEASE?! you promised to. Really love this fic. Been reading this for monthes, die waiting, forces all friends to read it. so, please up date soon. wanna know if Bakura is gonna get some, is Ryou gonna give, with Yami & Yugi get more, or will it be Jou? Did Jou & Kaiba really did it before or after they pass out? ~please hurry.~ (get down & begs)"We're not WORTHY!" Thanx & PEACE OUT!
| Title: *excited*
Reviewed By: GutterFlower On: November 10, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, this was a fun chapter to read ^___^ Bakura and ryou are hilarious. Jou's thoughts to himself...I fall out of my seat laughing my butt off...yep I m new, a friend showed me your story and I've enjoyed it so much so far ^_^ lol so there's a tree coming out of your gutter? what a coincedence...that would be cool to see...I got my name from a Goo Goo Dolls album..GuttFlower =meaning a person who went through a hard time and even after it's over, they're the same person as they were before the trouble had started. well hope you post the next chapter soon...
| Title: O_O
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Okay... I can't remember if I reviewed here or not so I'll just do it again anyway... XD Wow, Jou is so totally NUTS! Kaiba is going to KILL him! I love the way Bakura said he was going to rape Ryou though XD that was GREAT! I really love this story, it's so great ^_^ but you need to update more often! ~~ Nyoko: Stop being a hypocrite >_> ~~ *sigh* I know I know! I need to do the same... But I'm trying! I really am! The next ficcy I'll be updating will HOPEFULLY be Pools of Glass... which is probably my best fic at the moment XD OH! I'm SO SORRY about your Turkin... I want one now! But that would be kinda hard since I live in the city *sigh* I hope you get another one ^_^ ANYWAY, enough of my rambling, GREAT, AWESOME PERFECTLY DELIGHTFUL STORY!! Keep up the AWESUM work!! :D
| Title: WEEEEEEEE! *cough*
Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu/the monster in the attic ^_^ On: November 07, 2004 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* *sneeze* I'm sick. Gah. But... WEEEEEEEEE, your story rocks! It rocks my socks, even! It makes me feel better, and hyper for the first time today! I've actually been reading it for ages and ages, but I just finally finished reading it. It's so long that I never had enough time, and you kept updating too! Not like that's bad, LOL. Okay, I would like you to picture this scenerio for a moment. My dad's in law school right now, and one time I happened to be in with him, and I was on one of the computers in the law library while I was waiting for him to get out of class. And I was reading your story, and trying my very hardest not to laugh, which just wasn't working. Oh, the looks. Those poor, industiouslly studying lawyer larvi... And you should know that your story is a topic of frequent discussion amoungst me and my friends. One of them actually bought me a pack of computer paper so I could print it out for her, because her internet died. *mourns for internet* But I guess I should actually comment on the story, ne? I love the way you write Bakubaku-chan! He's very glompable. Sweet yet in character; I don't think I've ever seen that pulled off so well. And I like the way you describe Kaiba's bath-housey spa thing. I wants one. I'm so sorry about your pet, btw. That's happened to our chickens before. T_T Well anyway, I hope you update soon! Soon like now. Or yesterday. Or the day before. Or the day before the day before... ^_~ *gasp* My words! Sniffle... Well, bai bai :)
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 10:02 CST
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Hehe since you gave me two replies i give you two reviews...although it may look like three thanks to the word restriction. Yes i love having two replies it makes me feel loved *sings *somebody loves me and dances around comp* blergh may not have a brother but do have father whose giving me odd looks. Yep two whole lonely months. And yes 15 lol yeah dedication is good. You speachless *reads the only in metaphore bit* ah right couldn't see it happening. Yes thats the plan but will you stick to it...huh huh huh huh "stop it donkey"...lol i've been watching Shrek 2! Ohh since this is a second review i'm reviewing the non Seto/Jou parts. Yami/Yugi was so KAWAII! ohh and the Ryou/Bakura bit was funny. I had this image of Ryou running down the street and Bakura chasing him ripping off his clothes so that by the time he stopped Ryou was nude O.O *snicker*...See you story has corrupted me and my 'inncocent' mind...and i love it!
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