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| "Insert Cool Yu-Gi-Oh! Related Title" Reviews/Comments [ 313 ] | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:33 CDT
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Yay! I finally got around to reading your fic! Oh, I'm so sad... Why didn't I read this earlier? It's awesome I tell you! I like it when Yami is smug, Bakura is angry and Jou is messed up in the head. (You know you can't kill off Jou. Character deaths just ain't cool.) Ah, when Jou-kun was all tossing and turning in his bed reminded me of myself. I hate it when I can't sleep. The cieling fan is on high because I'm hot, but my skin is cold so I wrap the covers around me. Zombies scare the crap outta me... Not to mention the fact that I once fell off my bed that way. That really hurt... I mean, I have a wooden floor. WOOD!! Anywho, I should be doing my math homework so I'll just keep rambling because I don't want to do my work. Speaking of phones, I really hate my house phone. It usually rings whenever something really cool is going on. Either while I'm watching Slayers, staring at my Yami wall, or while I'm beating the last bad guy in one of my video games it always rings. Always. Hey, can Bakura come over and kill my phone too? (Update!)
| Reviewed By: *+*+*Gemini*+*+* On: September 22, 2004 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahaha This chapter was funny as hell!! I couldn't stop laughing! Poor Bakura, yet again thwarted by the Pharoah, and the phone... dead after only just recently living. ^____^ I love this story!! I'm dying to know what all happens!! >.< The ending was painful! I just stared at the screen in denial... telling myself, you wouldn't be so evil as to end it there... but after collecting my wits, I am writing this review especially to say UPDATE SOON!!! Please, I beg of you! I just gotta know what happens!!
| Reviewed By: *koumori wolf* On: September 22, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! But you ended it with a god-awful cliffy!! >.< *pulls hair out* Poor Jounouchi!! I gotta know what happens! Is Kaiba gonna save him?! Oh, to many possibilities, such a great fic!! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chappy. Please update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Euphoria On: September 17, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I am way too excited about your next chapter!!! Ryou and Bakura's games are always the best! You know the hide and go... oh screw it... scare and screw games are always the best. I love Bakura!!! (I think i'm going to start saying this everytime I review), but he's very complex. Yeah, that's the word. I don't know what that little Japanese Sentence meant, but i'm excited to find out! I love Malik too, the comedy Malik though, the depressed and morbid Malik isn't a lot of fun, although he's always a whore, intersting. Update soon!
| Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: koneko666 On: September 15, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could give you more points i would!!! i love your story! but would you please please please update!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 20:35 CDT
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O.O Ah! Save him, Kaiba!!!! >< Go save Jou! Now!! Awww, poor Baku-chan... Well, at least Ryou isn't refusing anymore. ^^;;; Congrats, Yugi and Yami! Let's hope all goes well the next d- I mean, later that morning. ^^;; Burgers at 9:30 am, that is so the typical Yugi! XD Oh well, I don't normally eat breakfast so I don't know where I'd go. P.S. I'm not holding you against updating after a long while 'cause I do it too.
| Reviewed By: Beysie On: September 15, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To sum it all up... WOW!!!!!! I just spent the last two days reading this entire fic (to chap 27). Great! Fantastic! My son couldn't get to bed fast enough for me to read this uninterrupted! Ok, now I just need the next chapter before I do something crazy, like turn Bakura on you and chase you too! (BTW, he's one of my favorite chars, but SetoxJou is my fav pairing.) Bakura and Ryou's 'hide and seek' scene is one of my favorites... Mmmmm, foreplay!!!! Hahahaha Actually, I'm taking a Japanese course (just started last monday) and I'm hyped! I plan on being an official Japanese translator when I'm done my schooling. Then I plan on ousting all those crappy subbers out there and giving a decent translation! I don't have an account yet, so I can't long in yet, but I'm gonna do somthing about that when I'm done this! Actually, I wrote my first fanfic ever recently, and although I'd like to post it, I'm nervous... it's short, a oneshot, needs much editing... One of these days I'll put the finishing touches on it... this fic has inspired me! Tonight, after a small nap... dream of being sandwiched between Bakura and Ryou... Mmmmm...
| Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS WEONDERFULL oh by the way *hits autheress upside the head* dont take thqat long again O_O Yugi a sex bee i love it Joinche oh my and i still want to know whats up with mokuba and that was sooooooooo funny with poor ryou and Bakura and the phnones death yeah we go to the same shcool and were so happy i thonk except the stupid math teacher who needs to die and burn in hell for hating me and her being jeoles cause her husband wants to sleep with me (i said no *shivers disgusted*) and i have half the book to do and she accidentilly lost all my papers so im failing otherwise im straight a student anywhay write soon please ja ne
| Reviewed By: sakayora (not signed in) On: September 14, 2004 17:11 CDT
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O.O Whoa... COOL!!! I haven't read this fic in a while... glad you updated! T-T I feel so bad for Jounichi... This is a great fic...but um yeah, I bet you already know that!
| Title: Aroo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whatever happened to my bum sister? She left MediaMiner for FanFaction.net. She occasionally comes back though (as you can see from her short crappy ass review below :P). I'm glad you liked the review, I'm good like that.. jk, lol. And yeah, Bakura isn't mean, he's evil. There can be two personalities of Bakura: this one, and one that BakurasMistress writes about in Tainted Reflection. Everything else is a variation of the two. Anyway, back to this chapter. Very enjoyable. EXCEPT, for all the YamixYugi nonsense. I'm not a big fan of that pairing, and it was annoying how you kept jumping to them. I mean, Bakura didn't get any!!! :( Still loving the SetoxJou thing though. I was wondering if you were gonna put any in this chapter, and then I read the ending XD. It's like my sis says, more SetoxJou, less YamixYugi. Other than that, update really soon with a nice long chapter!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: xxallisonxx (too tired to log in :p) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, its been like a long ass time since i last reviewed. just to let you know, i have been following the story. I love this story, its just cute. Just one request, more jou/seto, less yami/yuugi. The over all story is fab. XD
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:46 CDT
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. Yeah unreciprocated love is the pits and i can't imagine how it would affect Mokuba. Ooo yes Jounouchi...that could be problematical. Nooo don't finish it, i know there will be a sqeaul but this ones so amazing and and...ok i don't have any realy arguments lol. Any back to my gush stage this chapter rocked, after the slight angst of the last chappie this one seemed so hysterical the contrast was so brillient. But the bit at the end was scary, but we all have to rememebr that Kaibas making his way to the place where Jou is so maybe Kaiba wont be tooo out of it and save Jou...hmm once again he's the hero of my heart lol sorry its my obsession but onto my faveourite part of the chapter....the bit where Bakura and Ryou were in the middle of things and then Yugi called and Yami did the whole bet thing and the he called AGAIN and Bakura obviously had a bit of a spaz and attacked the phone and Yami was all like *Yay 100 yen!*...urm heres my rewriting again thanks to an appaling memory. Anyways better go and do some updating of my own now i've bothered you about it!
| Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:44 CDT
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Yay two replies again! Lol you have no idea how honered i was when you reviwed my story lol btw how is that possum?! lol And about the whole updating thing...anytime you go to long i will always do it. Hip hip hooray for subtitles. Ookies then Rafeal isn't Odion but a different dude whos in leauge with Dartz whos evil personified...got it. Btw just wondreing do we ever see Malik/Marik in any of the futre story lines after Battle city? Hmm Kaiba story i think every single person can learn something about themselves from his life mostly to never give up. Lol RyokoMink sounds as cool as you, and you must have great convos...sigh.....sorry started daydreaming. But the whole Kaibaland thing is so amazing and just another indication that hes a great guy under the bastard facade...btw does he go off to america after battle city cos i havn't actually found out yet...how deprived am i lol. Hate to admit but never heard of Escaflowne or Yami no Matsue...bows head in shame. Lol yay our 'emails' to one another its great fun, after all theres only so much you can write about a chappie no matter how amazing it is, but did u see that MM.org are going to try to stop reviews that arn't soly about the writing?! Oh that part in Chappie twenty six breaks my heart everytime i read it, i don't know why you just have such an amzing talent at writing. I dread to think how much i'd bawl if you did an angst story ....:-S lol. Yeah unreciprocated love is the pits and i can't imagine how it would affect | Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so know what you mean since it happened to me this morning, augh! Anyway I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for a while, so welcome back! Cool chapter, but this is a very cool story, lol. Update soon, ja! ^___^
| Reviewed By: JoeysGal o.O On: September 14, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAYUM GIRL about TIME you updated!! I was beginning to get worried. As for all those stupid things I sent to your old mail, what a waste of time! You should have given me your email sooner ;_; ANYWAY... GREEEEEEEAAAAAAT chapter! BUT: ONE THING: DO NOT I repeat, DO NOT kill Jounouchi! Thats so meaaaann waaaaaaahhh you caaann'''''ttttttt *whiiiiiiiine* =[ DON'T DO IT!! KAIBA WILL HAVE NO LOVER!! CURSE MOKUBA!!! WAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!! *runs off in a screaming frenzy to find her yellow vacuum cleaner and her dark, evil and very heavily pregnant yami Nyoko* @____________________@
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