| "Dangerous Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rosemine On: December 08, 2003 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...Wow...That was just beautiful. I swear there are tears in my eyes. *sigh* I love how you portray both Rin and Sesshomaru. Their feelings seem so real, it really touched me! Their conflicting emotions and actions were wonderfully written! Definately loved the whole garden scene, very ....I can't even describe it. I love the way you write them, so unique and fresh. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dieing to see how Sesshomaru will continue his..err... courting(?) of Rin!!!!^_^ Please continue your story!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so good please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Aurora Fairchild On: November 18, 2003 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me your going to write more Email me at Princess_hells_firsat_light@yahoo.com when you are done with it
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Reviewed By: getit199 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fic , the Sess Rin theme while done alot is espically well done with this fic. The heavily reluctant Rin is what I like most . Most fics usually have sess as the reluctant one so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT!!!! HE WANTS HER!!! Woohoo!!!! Hehe, fanfic reading before lunch, and a good one on top of that :) My day is going well :) Keep it up! I'm waiting to see what happens!! Will she give in? Will she make him suffer some more?? ^__^
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:32 CST
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mm, thanx... although i should be finishing up my book in order to start on my paper... better do that now! ^^
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW IT! He can't live without her ^__^ Thanks for the new chapter, I will patiently wait for the next (maybe not so patiently, but you know what I mean). Keep 'm coming!
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! This is so nice!! Please bring the next update soon, I am waiting impatiently! Like someone said before, make sure Sesshomaru knows what's right for him and gets her back ;) Hehe, time for Rin to teach him a lesson! ^__^
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: November 10, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good , but i dont get it ! i thought he can heal all the scars. what he doesnt want that one to heal is that it ? liek kenshin? anyway , update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 01:58 CST
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no words as in a good thing. =P cant wait till sesshoumaru finds out about rin's escape now ^^
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Title: yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you go girl! (to the writer) make sure he falls hard for her and then make him hurt. cant waith for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Angel86 On: November 08, 2003 00:03 CST
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Very good indeed! I loved how you put so much of Rin and Sess's emotions into this fic. I also enjoyed the detail. Keep up the good work!
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Title: yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 18:22 CST
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oh my god ! you gotta update soon! i cant wait to see how he's gonna reat , i hope she act cold towards him, make it kill him inside..!! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Yumeni who cant login right now of some reason *growl* On: November 07, 2003 17:46 CST
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I´m also following this one. I hope it ends well for Fluffy and his girl! *waiting for the next chap*
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Reviewed By: gothichotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALY love this story so far!!! I never would have thought that he would just LEAVE her there!!! Good luck with the rest of it, and HURRY UP!!!!! lol.
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