"Dangerous Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: February 01, 2004 17:15 CST Comment/Review: i am so totally in love with this story. excellent job. are you writing another one? i love how rin turned into a kick ass fighter and didn't give in easily to Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 16:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! I finally got to read the end of this! I would make the enjoyment factor higher if I could! I loved it, keep it up :) Write more ^___^ Sooo cute^^
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Title: too lazy to log in... Reviewed By: nkm =P On: January 16, 2004 12:05 CST Comment/Review: lol, you kno i saw you typing this up yesterday night, and i was all like "yeah! she's gonna be updating soon!" and i had read it as soon as i could, which was while i was "borrowing" ur laptop after i finished with the matlab part of the hw... a good way to end the story, although it's kinda sad to see it finished... *sigh* i suppose now you'll be working on ur other fic or starting some new one, right? well, anything is fine as long as it'll distract me from the math hw!!! =D
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:54 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AHHHH I can't wait till the end!!! This is going soooo good^^ Please, put the next chapter up soon!
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Title: yasmin Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 09:03 CST Comment/Review: OMG I cant wait for the next chapter !
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Reviewed By: Rosemine On: December 08, 2003 20:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh...Wow...That was just beautiful. I swear there are tears in my eyes. *sigh* I love how you portray both Rin and Sesshomaru. Their feelings seem so real, it really touched me! Their conflicting emotions and actions were wonderfully written! Definately loved the whole garden scene, very ....I can't even describe it. I love the way you write them, so unique and fresh. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dieing to see how Sesshomaru will continue his..err... courting(?) of Rin!!!!^_^ Please continue your story!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 09:18 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: its so good please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Aurora Fairchild On: November 18, 2003 14:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please tell me your going to write more Email me at Princess_hells_firsat_light@yahoo.com when you are done with it
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Reviewed By: getit199 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 13:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked the fic , the Sess Rin theme while done alot is espically well done with this fic. The heavily reluctant Rin is what I like most . Most fics usually have sess as the reluctant one so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 05:03 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I KNEW IT!!!! HE WANTS HER!!! Woohoo!!!! Hehe, fanfic reading before lunch, and a good one on top of that :) My day is going well :) Keep it up! I'm waiting to see what happens!! Will she give in? Will she make him suffer some more?? ^__^
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:32 CST Comment/Review: mm, thanx... although i should be finishing up my book in order to start on my paper... better do that now! ^^
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 05:10 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I KNEW IT! He can't live without her ^__^ Thanks for the new chapter, I will patiently wait for the next (maybe not so patiently, but you know what I mean). Keep 'm coming!
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!!! This is so nice!! Please bring the next update soon, I am waiting impatiently! Like someone said before, make sure Sesshomaru knows what's right for him and gets her back ;) Hehe, time for Rin to teach him a lesson! ^__^
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: November 10, 2003 08:53 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was good , but i dont get it ! i thought he can heal all the scars. what he doesnt want that one to heal is that it ? liek kenshin? anyway , update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nankinmai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 01:58 CST Comment/Review: no words as in a good thing. =P cant wait till sesshoumaru finds out about rin's escape now ^^
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