| "Now Entering Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: MELISSA FLEMIN On: February 28, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UP DATYE!!!!!!!!UPDATE!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!!!!!!UPDATE!COME ON I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN THE DAMN STORY!!!!SO GET YOUR LAZY ASS OFF OF ANYTHING(OR ANYONE AT THIS THIS CASE)!!!AND UPDATE THE REST OF THE STORY!!!!!I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRYYYYY FOR CUSSING AT YOU AND I HAD NO RIGHT IT IS JUST THAT I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY AND I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!I AM PISSED OFF AT MY BOYFRIEND FOR FUNKING ME WITHOUT WEARING A CONDOM!!!!!!!OH MAN I AM GETTING WET TALKING ABOUT IT!!!!!OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH,TTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN(HAHAHA HAHAHAHAH)0AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAN CAN MY BOYFRIEND MAKE A GOOD SEX TOY OR WHAT!!!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: January 01, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 29, 2003 10:44 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i am totally lovein it! But needs more kag and inu!
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Title: Hey yo
Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, are you gonna finish? It's a sexy fic.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 09, 2003 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Update allready!! It's been a while!... Sorry, i just can't wait and it is getting me kinda... funny.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed in) On: December 02, 2003 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't update in a long time so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 01, 2003 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHOA!!! That was so hot!!!..... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait to read more please update soon!
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Title: yeah!!!^_~
Reviewed By: Lil_charter_Inu On: November 26, 2003 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more now!!!!! OMG this is such a good story.... if u dont write more i will have to hunt u down and force u to! well anways enough of my psycho ranting, i realy enjoyed ur story and cant wait till u update. ^_~
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Title: hot
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOO HOT, BUT are they going to get pregnant , i'm just wondering since you had none of them use protection
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed in) On: November 25, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey good chapter I love your story so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 21, 2003 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 05:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I love this story so much PLEASE UPDATE I can't wait for something to happpen between Inu-Yasha and Kagome.
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