| "Alliance" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update now I really like this story..
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 20:50 CDT
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Hmmm... I think I like this story. It's not far enough a long for me personally, to be able to tell. But keep up the good work and I'll probably have more to say later on... ^_^
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 22:49 CDT
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This is an interesting AU and yes, I hope you do continue it because I have been waiting for updates :) I am curious more as to your "bearer" and definition of same. Call me curious ..... please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 04:57 CDT
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I simply loved this! It was just perfect especily the prank Duo and Qautre pulled. Please continue this.
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Title: Alliance
Reviewed By: jeangreymullinsjr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 00:11 CDT
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Aw, we're sooo close! You're such a tease. I think Duo's taking this much better than I would be at the thought of being married to a nasty old man...haha. Please update soon! -I'm glad to hear that you'll be finishing this story. I agree that too many writers leave 3/4 of the way and never continue, much to my dismay. Thanks for the renewed faith! ;)
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Title: Alliance
Reviewed By: jeangreymullinsjr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 15:32 CDT
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Hello, I know you haven't written anything for this story in quite a while, but I was hoping you could start up again and finish it? I really like it so far and wish to continue reading. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am intrigued - I am curious to see how you are planning to connect up Heero and Duo....How will you get rid (?) of Odin..... I look forward to readming more from you. Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 00:42 CST
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I don't know what to say... I like your fic, really, but it's too similiar to this one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3833521/1/ And what am I supposed to think? V_V_V_V_V
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Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 29, 2004 16:09 CDT
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nonononononononononono you can't let Duo marry Odin. Oh yeah what up with heero and them. well any way i love the story and were its going so please put the next chapert up soon. And i agree with the other review that Duo will hate his father for what he did. other then that hurry up and write some more.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 21:52 CST
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I love this fic. I can't wait for you to write more. I can't wait to see what Duo's reaction to what his father has to tell him is. I bet he'll hate his father after that one.
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Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 23:24 CST
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yay another chapter, I love this story, so has Odin died is that why Heero is gonna marry Duo??? can't wait till the next chapater.
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Reviewed By: wild kat! On: December 20, 2003 23:21 CST
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hey! i love this fic please continue!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 20:59 CST
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Good chapter. Can't wait to see how Duo takes the news that his father has for him. And I can just imagine the "deal" that King Howard made with King Odin. ~_^
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Reviewed By: Random Insanity Rocks On: December 04, 2003 11:04 CST
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About that Trowa+/xDuo pairing, Tx/+D or TxD would work too. (It took me forever to figure out what those symbols meant. Say something if you don't!
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Reviewed By: Randam Insanity Rocks On: December 04, 2003 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about that enjoyment factor. But Odin (oden?) just can't get his way with Duo. Never!!!!!! Any of the other gundam boys or even Zechs or Trieze would do better. Actually, Trowa+/xDuo sounds okay. Until next update arrives, Ja
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! U updated! its coming along great. i hope u update again really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: fire of phoenix On: December 02, 2003 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! you cant let duo marry odin.i wanna know what happens next.please post the next chapters *flutter eyelashes and gives puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 18:39 CST
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I love this story, I hope tht Duo's father doesn't marry Duo to Odin. can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 20:15 CST
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This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Write more, onegai.
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Title: Lovin it!
Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finnaly its updated! HURRAY! I'm loving ur fic! duo is the best!
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Reviewed By: wild kat On: November 25, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love this fic!! i hope u continue it!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 17:33 CST
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U have 2 update soon! its killing me not knowing whats gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 19:05 CST
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Yeah!!! it sound sooo koool pls continue!!! i'm loving ur storyline so far and ur plot is hidden so please continue!
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