| "The King of Thieves" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
aww...please continue...I could sense romance coming...
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Reviewed By: me On: December 02, 2003 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's GREAT, I really want to know what happens when he raids the palace, PLEASE. Maybe you can like say he put the tablet in and he meets the sister and i dunno what insaneAUTHORESS said.
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Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 10:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story...you better continue...
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Title: insaneAUTHORESS
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your fic and i hate seeing a person quit a fic. so here are some ideas... The boy dark hair i think :P is the pharaohs nefew? i think i got that somewere i dunno. But have some weardo thing like his dad didn't become pharaoh so he was 'murderd' and the kid wants revenge... okay then Bakura is sent into the palace to 'murder' the pharaoh but runs into lil Yami. Hmmm i guess the pharaohs daughter would be Yamis sis so after meeting Yami Bakura meets Sabriel (just a cool name, shes the pharaohs daugter.) Bakura can't kill Pharaoh like that meeting the 2 sweet kids. by the by Sabriel is the older sis so its not like kid and pysco. ahhh thats what i have so far... im better at ideas i gotta work on putting um in words...
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