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| "A New Sibling" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: i'm dumb!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 02, 2004 01:57 CST
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I was reading over the story again, and i just realized something. in the cahpter "Ah love... And weapons!" *blush*, I noticed you wrote, ""blah blah blah," Miroku muttered under his breath, but still audible to the taiyoukai and youkai in his arms (A/N: Arms- as in plural! yay Sesshomaru!)" and I feel soooo lost. why, "Yay SEsshomaru?" well, i take awhile toread something, although i can go pretty fast and not miss anything. (well, not really ^_^;;) well, either send me an e-mail or write it as a review! P.S> I hope you got my e-mail! bye! from, RFPfirecat
| Title: oh......oops!!!!!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 02, 2004 01:14 CST
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sorry!!! I didn't know that you posted up your "e-mail"! sorry! I have a tendancy to skip over things while i read. Like some things that might be um... "important" eh hee hee hee. I'm sorry you can't e-mail santa calus... but if i only knew who you really were........ well, if i find out, i'll tell you!! ok! now to send you a e-mail, oh great person-who-i-can't-spell-their-user-name-so-i'll-just-go-send-you-an-e-mail -now!!! from RFOFIRECAT
| Title: it's ok.........
Reviewed By: Mousefire On: April 02, 2004 01:01 CST
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Dear really-cool-person-who-writes-this-extremely-good-fanfiction-and-i-totally- love-how-your-doing-it, I read your fan fiction and it seems i am not the only one awake at 2 in the morining.I don't think it is nessescary to put me on here. I don't think my character would add to the story much! Oh, but RFP fits right in. SHe and Sesshomaru are like a bowl of kitty chow and a bowl of kitty water (yes, I couldn't resist my kitty-like features ^____^). congrat ulations!! (heh heh..) if it was your first romancy scene, I am very impressed. (not all people can tie Kuzume and Sesshomaru THAT well together. Your a natural...) ^___________^ I can't wait 'till you finish this, and don't worry about excluding me, my character isn't suited-well for this awesome story! just forget me! Well, got to go. TTFN, ta ta for now! ~MOUSEFIRE
| Title: sorry!
Reviewed By: santa claus On: April 02, 2004 00:52 CST
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I am sorry i haven't been visiting here forever, I had like 7,000,000,000,000,000 things to do! I have track in the mornings, and I got school until 4:00 p.m. and i got homework and i have to compose a school play at night. it s so overloading me! I really feel exhausted. It's in the morning, and i have a computer in my room but I can't get e-mails yet. :( So, I have to stick with reviews until I can get MY stinky, annoying password!!! CURSE THOSE STUPID, EVIL, MENACING PASSWORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CURSE YOU PASSWORDS WITH A THOUSAND CURSES!!!!! Oh, I still can use my mom's password if, if and only if, she lets me. But she works till' 9:)0 and I can't usually speak to her! curse my busy scheudules!!!! well, I'll get to you later! bye!P.S. thanx for announcing that! i feel really happy! P.S.S. I really like your fan fiction! P.S.S.S. I really like RFP's character! P.S.S.S.S. I really like your character! P.S.S.S.S.S. I like doing this... P.S.S.S.S.S.S. ok, this is the last one! P.S.S.S.S.S.S.S. ok, i lied! P.S.S.S.S.S.S.S.S. ok, bai bai!
| Title: cool!!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: April 02, 2004 00:43 CST
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uh.... ok... very interesting story so far. You made my stomach lurch (not in a bad way; a good way ^_^) with excitement as I read the chapters. :) It was very good, I'm happy! could you e-mail me because i don't have my smelly password yet and it really sucks. i forgot to tell you yesterday, happy april fool's day! (late april fools now.) and it isn't too much of a liking, it kind of suits Kuzume and her attatchment to Sessshomarau, ok, alot like her liking to him. thanak you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for listening to my reply! i can't wait to the next chapter!! from, rfpfirecat P.S. My e-mail is www.tbf@theblantonfamily.com (it's my dad's e-mail but he doesn't come to this computer anymore :) lucky me!) i'll send an e-mail back to you! bai
| Title: bored....
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat ~~~~ :) On: April 01, 2004 01:43 CST
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I'm bored, so i read your fic again! It is now 2: 30 a.m. and i am going to sleep so my parents don't wring me out and hang me to dry O.O;;SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT TORTURE YOU GIVE TO NARAKU!!!!! ^_______________________________________________^ FROM, THE SUPERLY DUPERLY STARNGE KUZUME A.K.A RFPFIRECAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
| Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) :) :) :) :) :) On: April 01, 2004 00:43 CST
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It is about 1:40 a.m., and i am bored so i read your fan fiction again.:) :) :) :).... so i want to review again ! first, it is really awesome, and i thak you thank you THANK YOU SO MUCH I FEEL HAPPY INSIDE WHEN YOU USE MY CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ~from the cool rfpfirecat :)
| Title: two things I want to tell you..
Reviewed By: Running Fence Post (RFP) On: March 31, 2004 14:47 CST
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Oh, I wanted to tell you something, one: I want to change my name. (not Kuzume) You know my name RFP? well, I can't log in so I'm calling myself rfpfirecat (it's my name in neopets *_*) and, about Sesshomaru, can you make it more like you know- um... how should I put this? well, kind of- like liking, not just aquaintances? I mean, I kind of sound like Rin or Jakken, being a loyal DOG to him. Not saying that's bad- but I mean, it's like I just hang around him. But I luv my Personality!! I like the bubbly sorts!! It's sooo kawaii!!! keep up the good work! Oh, it's an awesome story, and I know how hard it ids to write stories. I know exaclty how frustrating it is! well, I'm glad you pulled through and keep up the fab. work!!! Yayyy! good work!! From~~~RFPFIRECAT!!
| Title: kewwllllllllllllllllll!!!!! *____*
Reviewed By: Rnning Fence Post (RFP) On: March 31, 2004 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!11111 thanx for putting me in!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo loved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry, i had to much sugar this morning *_*;;) oh yeah!!! I don't care if I have a bubbly personality, it's kewl how i'm in it!! thank you thank you thank you! thank YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *_______________________________________________*
| Title: Jinsitkai
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaijinsitkaiSouthernlands [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again just bored it is 12:06 a.m. so pretty bored and tired just listening to all region music and fearo or how ever it is my first band is better than your second band and so are our songs.well g2g signed Anubis God of the Underworld
| Title: TaiyoukaiJinsitkaiSouthernlands
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaijinsitkaiSouthernlands [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again awesome work now i love your stories but i do have a life so i won't be checking all the time like Santa Clause and RFP AND THAT OTHER PERSON BUT KEEP WRITING. PLEASE ADD ME CARE BEAR. LAUGH OUT LOUD JUST PLAYIN YOUR NOT CARE BEAR. HAHAHAHAHA GIVE ME MY SONIC GAME BACK. OH AND YOU WILL NOW REFER TO ME AS Anubis god of the under world. k bye. keep writin.
| Title: TaiyoukaiJinsitkaiSouthernlands
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaijinsitkaiSouthernlands [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooooo totaly awesome *sigh* if only i could write that good. whhhhhhhhhhhyyyyy can't i write that good. but i am working on it hey people give me reviews my story is Jinsitkai Taiyoukai of the Southerlands it is pretty good but still not as good as yours hey ya'll and give me reviews to please. hey add me to please even if i die you know me so go ahead do it do it.
| Reviewed By: monsters On: February 01, 2004 00:08 CST
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hey long time no speek MAKE MORE FANFICTIONS NOW!!!!!! please and thank you in advance
| Reviewed By: klutzy Callie On: January 19, 2004 21:48 CST
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I wanted to let you know that I would like to be in here too! (i really think you won't like it but...) I am named Iynomaru and I'm a half dog demon. I have silver hair and golden eyes. I look exactly like Inuyasha except my outfit's blue and I am a girl and I have ice powers and I have a weapons kind of like Sesshomaru's except it isn't the Tensaiga. But it could save someone's life. I am a sorceress and I am just like Inuyasha when it comes to stubborness. I really enjoy being around Miroku and Kouga I personally like Miroku more than Kouga but it is very close. Miroku never does the "bearing child" or "misplacing hand" trick.I like Miroku and have a closer bond with Miroku than anyone else. it's okay if you don't even WANT to put me in it's only a suggestion. I personally'd rather let you do the story instead. Bye! :P
| Reviewed By: Icefalcon On: January 19, 2004 13:50 CST
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I really like your fic. I can't wait till the next Chapter! I also like your character! (Along with RFP's character too!) I read the 5th chapter and Possibly I have a good character you just might want to add to your story. My name is Raynes. I am (not related) kind of like Yura (the hair demon) except not exactly her personality. I am a hair demon (and yes I am evil :P) and I have raven black hair that is ALWAYS in a raid which hangs over my shoulder and goes down to my waist. I have midnight blue eyes. I always wear a white acrobatic outfit. I can balnce with great ease and I despise Shippo (and RFP if she's going to be in it) because when I was younger my entire kin was destroyed by Fox demons (and RFP's trube if she's in it). I have been getting my revenge by killing every fox demon and taking their hair and tails. I even try to get Shippo's!! Naraku is my sworn enemy. He always tries to be better than me. Pleeez try to fit me in somewhere! thanx for readin'!!
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