| "A New Sibling" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: monsters On: February 01, 2004 00:08 CST
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hey long time no speek MAKE MORE FANFICTIONS NOW!!!!!! please and thank you in advance
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Reviewed By: klutzy Callie On: January 19, 2004 21:48 CST
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I wanted to let you know that I would like to be in here too! (i really think you won't like it but...) I am named Iynomaru and I'm a half dog demon. I have silver hair and golden eyes. I look exactly like Inuyasha except my outfit's blue and I am a girl and I have ice powers and I have a weapons kind of like Sesshomaru's except it isn't the Tensaiga. But it could save someone's life. I am a sorceress and I am just like Inuyasha when it comes to stubborness. I really enjoy being around Miroku and Kouga I personally like Miroku more than Kouga but it is very close. Miroku never does the "bearing child" or "misplacing hand" trick.I like Miroku and have a closer bond with Miroku than anyone else. it's okay if you don't even WANT to put me in it's only a suggestion. I personally'd rather let you do the story instead. Bye! :P
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Reviewed By: Icefalcon On: January 19, 2004 13:50 CST
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I really like your fic. I can't wait till the next Chapter! I also like your character! (Along with RFP's character too!) I read the 5th chapter and Possibly I have a good character you just might want to add to your story. My name is Raynes. I am (not related) kind of like Yura (the hair demon) except not exactly her personality. I am a hair demon (and yes I am evil :P) and I have raven black hair that is ALWAYS in a raid which hangs over my shoulder and goes down to my waist. I have midnight blue eyes. I always wear a white acrobatic outfit. I can balnce with great ease and I despise Shippo (and RFP if she's going to be in it) because when I was younger my entire kin was destroyed by Fox demons (and RFP's trube if she's in it). I have been getting my revenge by killing every fox demon and taking their hair and tails. I even try to get Shippo's!! Naraku is my sworn enemy. He always tries to be better than me. Pleeez try to fit me in somewhere! thanx for readin'!!
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Reviewed By: RFP On: January 19, 2004 11:37 CST
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hi again!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really can't wait until the next chappy!!!! please update soon! oh, i am trying to get myself logged in on here so i can make my own to let you and others read so be patient and so will i!! yayyyyyy!!
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Reviewed By: orange blossoms On: January 19, 2004 10:58 CST
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i wanat to be in the fic too! (if it's okay with you i mean)I am a sweet little cat demon who has golden eyes and dark chocolate brown hair. I have cute little cat ears the are on top of my head. They are dark brown along with my long thin brown tail. I am about Shippo's age. I can make whirlwinds and tornados and I am extremely fast. When I am kidnappeed (or catnapped) I make loud wails and can make the person who stole me go deaf (if i really wanted to). I get aggrevated with Inuyasha who is always chasing me (grrr) and I really like Ayumu on the other hand. I spend alot of time going around in circles or chasing things (if not being chased by Inuyasha) or swimming in a stream or lake. I also luvvv to fish! whenever Inuyasha gets bored in goes fishing, I go along and catch a heck of alot more fish than Inuyasha (it's all part of instinct my friend). My name is Aryn. pleez try to fit me in if possible! thanx!
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Reviewed By: Mousefire On: January 17, 2004 22:45 CST
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kewl! i think (after reading "chapter 5") that i would like to make my own character. I am (a boy) kitsune and I have dark red hair and green eyes.I am a kitsune a.k.a. fox demon. I like Sango, Kagome, and Ayume (and posibly Kuzume if she is in there). I always hang on you guys (:P) and I have fluffy red ears on top of my head and a long red tail with a white tip. I like chickens alot and I only eat fruit, fish, and instant ramen. I never eat anything else. I have mystical powers like sorcerer. I am quite the abnoxious and stubborn type (like Inuyasha) and I get tired easily and sleep half the day. I can float or hover a few feet off the ground (only when I'm asleep. My name is Sumiku. I never apologize to anyone. Pleez try to fit me in if possible! thnax!
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Reviewed By: Santa Claus On: January 17, 2004 19:16 CST
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Hi again! Please update! I just read the "5th chapter and i can't wait! please keep up the good work! yay! i'm sooo excited!
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Title: YAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: RFP On: January 17, 2004 19:14 CST
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Yeah! thanx! I appreciate it! i can't wait for the next chapter! (I'd like to be friends with "Aura" if that's alright! *but not kouga :P*) Please update soon! ^________________________________________________^ bye bye!
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Title: Hi (for the third time) :P
Reviewed By: RFP On: January 12, 2004 14:32 CST
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kewl!! I forgot one thing about my personality... (kuzume..) I luv Sesshomaru. I am not like miroku but I do not hang on himeither. I get real shy around him. I have the same kind of outfit Inuyasdha does except for that my outfit is green. I also love plants. I always carry a red bag with me which I keep herbs in. I am a very good healer a.k.a. doctor. I get hot tempered when I'm sick and I don't take insults nicely. Even if someone was kidding. I usually never get real angry unless the (perverted monk Miroku does that wandering hand move on me... o.O;;)I also never back down from a challenge... especially from Naraku (growllllll >___< hissss) and I always annoy the heck out of him (yayyyy!!! ^_____________________________^) Sorry about forgetting that part!! I would like it if you could squeeze me in!! thanx!!! -RFP
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Reviewed By: klutzy CAllie On: January 03, 2004 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!!!!!!!!! RFP told me about this story so I checked it out!!! it's soooo cool!!!! i luv Ayumu's attitude and how she totally rocks!!!! keep up the good work and update soon!!!! I think you so totally rock!!! I will also check in daily like Santa Claus and RFP!!!! thanks sooo much for writing a good story like this!!!! I absoloutly love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Santa Claus On: January 03, 2004 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kewl!!! kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl kewl i just luv your work keep going!!! it's awesome!!! like what RFP said, can I be in your fic too? My name is Aura and I am a wolf demon (like Koga) I live with Kouga since my parents died. I have pitch black hair (like Kouga) that falls to my knees and I never put up and Blue eyes (like Kouga). WHat I aren't supposed to know is that we are twins (how'd you guess? :P) and he ran away from home. I am quite calm and I never get angry. At least if you don't count Inuyasha always being a pain. I have the exact same clothes as Kouga except for I have a longer tail and the bottom piece goes to my knees (what ever that thingy is that he wears. It looks like a skirt O.O) But the rest is up to you! thanks and good luck on your story!! I will look in daily for the next chapter, oh, happy new year!! -saint nick
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Title: hi again!!!
Reviewed By: RFP On: January 03, 2004 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again!!! do you think I could be in it somehow? MY name is Kuzume and I am said to be shippo's older sister. I have tangerine hair that goes down to my waist and I have golden eyes. I am a fox demon and also a sorceress. I have four long creamy white tails and pointed elf ears. I am one year younger than Sesshomaru (how ever old that is :P) and i am really stubborn but will never allow my friends to get hurt. If you could possibly squeeze me in there that would be great!!! thankz, RFP
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Title: kewl!
Reviewed By: Sessyluvr On: January 03, 2004 08:54 CST
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Cool!!!please write your next chapter soon!!! I enjoy reading it!!! pleaseeeeeeee thankz!!!
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Reviewed By: RFP On: January 02, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'LL LITERALLY NEVER BE ABLE TO READ IT UNTIL A\I GET BETTER GRAES!!! MY DAD WILL BLOCK THE SITE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: monsters On: December 11, 2003 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bold Italics i loved it MAKE MORE NOW PLEASE AND THANK YOU IN ADVANCE BY THE WAY I THINK I MIGHT BE YOUR BEST FRIEND ON FANFICS
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