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Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 23:07 CDT
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OMG - that is so wonderful!! I haven't seen the anime to FB, just have the first two vols. released by Tokyopop....what a moving story you have!!!! O_O Update soon! Sara-sama
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Title: need a beta?
Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a definately awsome fic. I honestly haven't read very many FB fics yet, since I'm just getting into it, but this one was just wonderful. I do have to critisize your spelling, typing, and grammar some. It's just the writer/editor in me that just won't let me enjoy a fic without fixing all the mistakes in my head. And it's not like I need more work, But I would like to offer you my services as a beta reader, and even back edit the chapters you've already posted. You can just email me sometime and let me know. I'm pretty sure that my email addy is correct in my bio, but this is just easier: crash_and_burn48654@yahoo.com Later - broken_angel(Crash's Angel)
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story!! i love love love it!!!!!!!!! i really hope that u update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: June 12, 2004 07:21 CDT
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but we got 2 chapters after a lonnnnnng wait so i don't mind - brillant chapters and hope for more SOON (please)
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Reviewed By: Sabina On: April 12, 2004 20:48 CDT
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This is an awsome fanfic so far I comend you on your writing style!! I wanted to tell you in case you didn't know it looks like when you uploaded the fic it cut some words off!! I wanted to let you know in case it was news to you. Anyway I am gonna read more of your fic now! Kissy_Moonlight is my name in this fanfic site!
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: Xtabay0522 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to start off by telling you first off that I hate fictions that have rape in them. It doesn't matter how vague the reference, I just can't seem to bring myself to read them. I get sick to my stomach at the very thought of trying. With that being said however, I have to compliment you on how you handled the emotional side of this story. I found myself crying throught most of it. If you could see my now you would see a woman with big ol' puffy red eyes. I think this is probably the first of anything, book, fan fic, or otherwise that I have sat down to read that dealt with this topic. You really did an excellent job on this, I can't compliment you enough of your writing style. I also liked the way you handled Yuki, and Kyou's relationship in regards to what happened to Tohru. There are not many fan fics in the fruits basket genre that I have read, but I have to say that this is one of the best. It is also one of the best fan fics I have read period! My compliments to you! You have truely created a beautiful story! Xtabay0522
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Reviewed By: Ummm.. lil ol' me! On: March 23, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So when ya finishing this damn thing huh?
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Title: MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Katieoko On: February 24, 2004 20:02 CST
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I LOVE this fic, definately the best i've read thus far! Please PLease PLEASE take this story back up! i need to know what happens, NEED!
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Reviewed By: SwtRose On: February 12, 2004 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please take this back up...........cliffhangers are killing me...... need more of your great story
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Title: MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Mixer04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE THIS!!!!I LIVE FOR THE DRAMADIC LINES OF PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!I WOULD LOVE SOME MORE OF THIS FABULUS WRIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pleaze??!?
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Title: Strong Emotions
Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. This fanfic was every strong in emotions. But was that the end... I hope not. Keep writing there is so much more you could do with this. ~Kendricks Alashane~
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Title: o.O Uwaaa...
Reviewed By: Cor-chan On: December 20, 2003 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omigawd, the emotions in this story are soooo strong... please write more soon.... I LOVE this... email me at corinn12@yahoo.com when you post more, okay? PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is great, please keep writing!! I always think a good story is one that can make me feel a part of it, and when I was reading your story, things that disturbed me startled the crap outta me! Great job!!!
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Reviewed By: macbaby On: December 09, 2003 10:38 CST
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great fic, please continue!
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Title: Beatiful.
Reviewed By: AngelicHentaiGoddess On: November 08, 2003 03:20 CST
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Your writing is superb! It's angsty, yes, but so are a lot of things in this life, no? Please continue writing. Thank you.
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