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Reviewed By: himino On: July 15, 2005 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ilove ur fan fic.....it really moved me ^^ update soon
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Reviewed By: Shima On: June 29, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!This is the best FB story I have ever read!!!It has humor (well,in the beginning,i think),it has romance,it has tragedy.The good makings of a wonderful story.I have cried on like almost every chapter.I loooove stories that can move me to tears.Well,til next time which I can hope is soon.Tata!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 13:09 CDT
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oh my.that was kinda sad.i'm gonna go read the next chap.tata!!
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Title: This is great!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading the whole thing^^ i beg you to please write more...please. *doggy eyes*
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Reviewed By: freakieaz On: February 05, 2005 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome!!! please continue soon!!!
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Reviewed By: folken is mine On: December 09, 2004 15:23 CST
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update pleeeaaassse *teary eyed*
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 16:56 CST
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Wow, this is deep, on so many levels. fantastic! i hope you have the opportunity to update soon!
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Title: yay for updates
Reviewed By: broken_angel(not signed in) On: November 04, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, these two new chapters certainly were enjoyable. Very nice development of the characters. As for taking up the task of editing the previous chapters, I'll have to save them to disk and work on them on my laptop. Oh, and I know you said you had someone beta these two chapters, but they missed some things. Which really isn't that big of a deal. I know I miss some things sometimes when I'm going over a chapter for someone. Anyway, I'll get edited chapters to you when I can. Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash
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Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 16:24 CDT
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write next CHAPTER!!
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Reviewed By: Shelly07 On: September 19, 2004 19:49 CDT
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I really like this and can't wait to read the rest. I'm really curious about what Akito is up to, because you're leaving all kinds of hints that are begging to be explained. I love Kyo and Tohru in this story too. You're really transmitting the love between them realistically - I love how this has made him grow up, and it's sweet the care he's taking with Tohru (I had tears in my eyes as they danced). I really like the way the rest of the family has been brought together by it all as well. Another thing I appreciate is the way you dealt with the rapes and their aftermaths. Thanks for making them realistic parts of the story with consequences; many fanfic writers just use them as plot devices and that's disturbing. Anyway, this is a very moving and well-written piece of fanfic. Please continue it.
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Reviewed By: Rena Takimoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 11:03 CDT
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Sugoi. This is beyond Sugoi. It's got everything a dark fanfiction needs. Romance, rape, and blood. I believe you are a great writer. I'd give your fanfiction a 20 out of 10. Good job!
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Title: phwee
Reviewed By: folken is mine On: July 12, 2004 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic with a passion. its so wonderful. i just hope the next update is sooner than last time, but i can understand feeling uninspired, it happens to the best of us.
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Reviewed By: macbaby1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 00:45 CDT
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This is really a great fic. Please continue updating and do something terrible to that damn Akito!
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Reviewed By: saikano390 On: June 23, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE SOON IM SOOO HOOKED!! i think u shouldve slowed down on the kyou things like "come on love, lets go" cuz it wouldve taken a liiiittttle longer for him to b that nice but i dont care really cuz its so romantic man i wish this story happened in anime bcuz its so good! write more soon!
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Reviewed By: shortcake middy (not logged in) On: June 16, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic! can't wait for more!
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