| ""Cause Guilt Like Gear"" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Raven_Payne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started writing and reading FanFics really and I know this was writen like a year ago from the time that I'm posting this review but I just gotta say it was pretty funny I'll give you that much but I dont think this story shouold be taken seriously for anyone reading this but if you're looking for something to make you laught and you're fan of some of the GG characters then you might enjoy this but on a side note anyone who wants to make Sol or Ky look gay com'on people that just stupid I see trip in on way to much gay porn as it is do i have to see my favorite video game chaacters doing crap like that too sheesh
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Title: Librastargirl16
Reviewed By: Librina On: December 09, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL second chapter was funny but although I'm no fan of I-no+Zappa because personally I'd rather see I-no+Bridget go at it I still enjoyed the fic. And the last part with Venom (giggles) oh man that's funny, hehe. Nice work! I hope you post another chapter ^_^
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Title: Librastargirl16
Reviewed By: Librina On: December 09, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was naughty/kinky just like I love lemons to be and it was quite funny (LOL) man that was good. ^_^ Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Lady Ravenshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
No offense, but this isn't even good enough to be lableled bad hentai. It so completely unbelievable and the writing style -- I'm being nice and allowing that there was an actual writing style -- is extremely poor. It's not that difficult to write actual sentences and paragraphs, people. This had all the makings of an extremely bad porn screenplay, just interchanged with the characters from Guilty Gear. An insult to them and their creators to be sure. I can only hope that this was done as a lark -- a tongue in cheek piece that you purposefully made this bad as a joke. I would hate to think that this was actually meant in any serious way. I only started to read this on impulse, as I'm a new fan to the game and was curious since there aren't a lot of GG fics that I've seen. I'm sorry I did now.
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Reviewed By: Sprink On: March 20, 2004 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... is this a joke? I mean, this isn't supposed to be serious, turn you on smut, right? If it is, I'm sorry, but you failed. Words like 'jizz' are just too funny to be used in erotica. However, if you were trying to be humourous, you've succeeded.
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Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ This is pretty strange to me, but I like it...yes I'm a teenaged perv...silence! I was just wondering...could you do one between Dizzy and Testament? I am a huge fan of both...
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:43 CST
Comment/Review:
more?
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