| "The New Girl In Town" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: January 23, 2004 04:34 CST
Comment/Review:
The guys have a crush on her and she knows YnY simply because she is a species known to all as: MARY SUE. -cue suspenseful music-
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLESAE CONTINUE! PS:I LOVE SETO KIABA! SETO MARRY ME!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting. whats up with the guys having a crush on her?????Its very wierd that Amber knows Yami. I think its a really great story. Please continue. I have nothing else to ssay. Seyonara ^_^
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Title: GRT
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 17:32 CST
Comment/Review:
It's great so far, but can you make your chapters longer? Can you chack out my story The Sands of Time? Then can you give me some pointers?
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