| "The Mary-Sue Invasion" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: I luv your story
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can I be paired with Yami. Put the next chapter that Yami is cheating on this wife and ends up with me. My name is Jacquelyn
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Title: I want in
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, do another chapter. This time put me in it.
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Title: What An Adventure
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, can I join you? I relly appreciate it. Hope to write more.
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Reviewed By: Scared out of mind On: April 01, 2004 04:47 CST
Comment/Review:
IEEE. This is very scary. I hate Mary-Sues. *Shudder* I luv the story though. Very original.
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Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 11:41 CST
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE,DAMN IT!lol
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra....they won't let me log in for some reason [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. When everyone was there, I thought you did it great. I probably would've forgotten someone or added someone who wasn't supposed to be there. Oh well, I forget my own password sometimes. Update soon.
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Title: I
Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Kyria:That was one of the funniest things I ever read! Chiiru:Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Loki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Oh my God, that is so funny! I think you handled the huge everyone's-there scene EXTREMELY well! ^_^ How disturbing... when Mary Sues attack
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