"What Tummy Ache?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 19:16 CST Comment/Review: when i saw the summary i passed it up a couple of times going just too creepy. well it was creepy but in a good way i dont think i'll read another jou/pegasus but this was surprisingly good for a statutory rape fic. keep writing your very good. (sorry i had to put that in their my dad will graduate from law school soon so i get to here all about things like statutory rape.)
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Reviewed By: Kumori no Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 14:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whee! That was sweet! At first I gave it a crazy look. (Honestly) But, to tell the ruth- This came out wonderfully! Even your grammar and spelling was great! This fic deserves a 15! ^_____^ Finally- Pegasus isn't the bad guy.
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Reviewed By: Blood Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 12:13 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I would give it a 12 but thats not an option. I loved it! It's really good. You a cool writer.
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 21:48 CST Comment/Review: SHIBBY!!!!! Yay, you made my freakin day. The ending was a little weird, but other than that it was awesome. I love unusual pairings like that.... *sighs happily*
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat the first On: November 08, 2003 19:00 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow wow wow... Peggie and Joey. Who' da thunk it? You da thunk it! Good lemonie de-lick-ious! Random Person: Speak right or don't speak at all. Momma: Okayyyyy *mummbles bastard mummbles no fun mummble piece of* RP: I can hear you!
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Title: Woah Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 18:24 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *dumb founded* Um..that was well....um...very interesting. Keep it up though.Cant wait to read more!Ill stick on my favorites page to wait for more chaps. See ya! bye bye!
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