| "Roof Romp" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: bluebug07 On: March 22, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!!! i've been trying to find you for so long!!! why are you not on 'a dragons lair' anymore? i love your stories!!! i think you are a great author and i wish i could write like you. my stories, if you can call them are like only two paragraphs long wh ich is one of the many reasons i don't post them. anyway please tell me why your not on ADL anymore, or if you ever need a beta reader my e-mail is lazygenius07@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: bluebug07 On: March 22, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya!!! i've been trying to find you for so long!!! why are you not on 'a dragons lair' anymore? i love your stories!!! i think you are a great author and i wish i could write like you. my stories, if you can call them are like only two paragraphs long wh ich is one of the many reasons i don't post them. anyway please tell me why your not on ADL anymore, or if you ever need a beta reader my e-mail is lazygenius07@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my all-time favorite fanfics!!!!!! DAMN IT'S SO FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!! *ahem* lol. y'know you could make a sequel like what happens after they get dried off and stuff :P well anyways this fanfic is super awesome. good job!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: death bich On: March 05, 2004 14:22 CST
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this is one of my favs and me and the voices in my mine have one thing to say "clap clap" G: no we dont lisn to me amend your ways B:dont lisn to her she says were insane
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Reviewed By: Moan my name the hentai On: February 22, 2004 02:30 CST
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Seto and Joey are cute. XD
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Reviewed By: ran_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to give you a 9 on the spelling for a few misspelled words. Otherwise this fic was fucking fantastic. Yes...pun intended. Heh. It was thoroughly enjoyable...the characters were relatively IC and the fact that you actually had Kaiba saying the phrase "...spread 'em." was by far my favorite part. Somehow I can just imagine him being a bit more practical and commanding than romantic. *laughs* Anywhoot. Bravo to you and great job!
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Reviewed By: Bunnychan GOY On: November 22, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another review!! XD yes I like the "Aww"s and "Uhh"s as well.. lol. Wait.. You have a doujinshi translator?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Bunnychan GOY On: November 22, 2003 21:22 CST
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GEEZUS BLITZ! Your crazy! You keep spitting out any more great fanfics and I'm gonna have to off ya. Taking all our reviews with your fancy shmancy lemons!! No, that was great Blitz. Can I start posting your fics on the group in the files section?
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like the ahhhh's and uhhh's. I like this story too.
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Reviewed By: grape [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 22:55 CST
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Lots of lemon goodness.I like it.Plus I like Seto/Joey
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