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| "Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 07:54 CST
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I'm actually surprised that there are so little reviews on this. I came across this particular fanfic again and again, and this was about the third time that I read it. This fiction really impressed me the first time I read it some time ago, and it still is amazing. You built up the story really well, and it's an interesting read. What amazed me the most was the chara designs, though. I love how you portrait Aya as a quite type. Not overly cold, bitter, or even deep down broken, but just a rather introverted quite type, with surly a lot of problems pilled up inside of him, but not dominating him. I also loved the way you made Youji all confused and unsure about the entire thing. Also I highly enjoyed the lack of silly pet-names, 13-year-old-girl-ish behaviour and violence and dominance issues. Those things respectivly may be nice from time to time, but they're overdone greatly in WK fandom. Overall this is a very charming fic, which I'd like to read again some time ^__^ Thank you.
| Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 06:53 CST
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I'm actually surprised that there are so little reviews on this. I came across this particular fanfic again and again, and this was about the third time that I read it. This fiction really impressed me the first time I read it some time ago, and it still is amazing. You built up the story really well, and it's an interesting read. What amazed me the most was the chara designs, though. I love how you portrait Aya as a quite type. Not overly cold, bitter, or even deep down broken, but just a rather introverted quite type, with surly a lot of problems pilled up inside of him, but not dominating him. I also loved the way you made Youji all confused and unsure about the entire thing. Also I highly enjoyed the lack of silly pet-names, 13-year-old-girl-ish behaviour and violence and dominance issues. Those things respectivly may be nice from time to time, but they're overdone greatly in WK fandom. Overall this is a very charming fic, which I'd like to read again some time ^__^ Thank you.
| Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 06:50 CST
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I'm actually surprised that there are so little reviews on this. I came across this particular fanfic again and again, and this was about the third time that I read it. This fiction really impressed me the first time I read it some time ago, and it still is amazing. You built up the story really well, and it's an interesting read. What amazed me the most was the chara designs, though. I love how you portrait Aya as a quite type. Not overly cold, bitter, or even deep down broken, but just a rather introverted quite type, with surly a lot of problems pilled up inside of him, but not dominating him. I also loved the way you made Youji all confused and unsure about the entire thing. Overall this is a very charming fic, which I'd like to read again some time ^__^ Thank you.
| Reviewed By: audi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 19:34 CST
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That was good, real good. A bit strange, in my mind, to have it be ayaxyouji, but it worked with what you were going for. It's unusual to see Youji so at a loss with what he's doing. Anyway, very enjoyable ^^
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 23:31 CST
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wow that was so long and so good!!
| Reviewed By: Tana_Dairyu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a Wicked awesome story ^_~ Yohji/Aya are my fave pair, closely followed with anything that has Schu with them ^_^ Anyways, I hope to get a chance to read more of your stories soon. You're a wicked great writer. ^_^ Tana wa Shin no Megami
| Reviewed By: Lavender M [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 23:35 CST
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I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this fic. It had just the right amount of humor and fluff and tension. Definitely one of the better things I've read in a long time. I can never get too much of Aya and Yohji. ^_^
| Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 09:50 CST
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Absolutely excellent one shot...its so hard to find good short stories that arent PWP's... I really like your writing and your stories are extremely enjoyable...please keep up the good work.. ^_^
| Title: Another job well done...
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gets all mushy and sniffles* Oro Scribble-chan, I loved the fic! You playd with the right timing perfectly. As in, you didn't give the reader what they wanted right away and in the end, it worked out nicely in your favor. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic and I sincerely hope you keep on writing AxY stuff for a very long time to come. The writing was well done, the characterizations were nice and the ending was beautiful. It was a little sweeter than a bittersweet ending and I appreciated that immensely. Please keep up the excellent work. -VL
| Title: Denial
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. It's good to see Yoji and Aya work out this situation together without the usual yelling matches... It's a nice twist on who the real target is, and the suspected target turned out to be a nice person. And the lemon was very lovely.
| Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, loved this story and the way Youji slowly realised what he felt for Aya let alone another man. I also liked the way Aya handled it all and wasn't predictably a cold asshole like many fics have him be. The lemon was just the icing on the cake, very much needed and...who am I kidding, I love Aya on top *smirks* Loved this fic very much. Shae/Shea-chan
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