| "Rose Murderer" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 11, 2005 10:50 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: ITS ME DH On: May 07, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI KR, OK I KNOW I ALREADY REVIWED ON FANFICTION.NET BUT I'M ACTUALLY REVIEWING SO I WONT FORGET TO TELL U LATER...ON UR PROFILE....U ER MIGHT WANT TO CHECK WAT UR HOMEPAGE IS...........*cough*its a porn pag*cough cough cough* i'll talk 2 u tommorow hopefully
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Title: UPDATED!
Reviewed By: hanyougirl9179 On: March 17, 2004 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 i'm speechless.THAT WAS GREAT![ok maybe i not that speechless.]i can't believe anyone could write like THAT.you got everyone's personalty down perfectly.i love how dramatic and touching it is. the fighting scenes are tooooo good.i would give you a hire rating,but it only goes upto ten. SHOOT! don't tell me that's the end? write another chapter,write sequel.ANYTHING! just continue the PLZ! UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED! p.s why are you reading this for? go write!^-^
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 15:09 CST
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wow, is it over? that stinks, write a sequal!!
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Reviewed By: dark sparrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 12:13 CST
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hello just to let you know this is accuatly Roofy i changed my name.this is so cool yet confusing. i love it update soon!
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Title: Your fic is great!
Reviewed By: YKurama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is perfect in every way possible it kept me reading.Every weekend I search for the perfect fic to read and this week yours blew me out of the water.You used perfect details and mastered Shuuichi's personality perfectly.I enjoyed the fact that you used imagination and mystery in creating the perfect plot for Youko's divious escape from Shuuichi.Please Keep writing and please update this fic soon! Keep up the good work and thank you for providing me with a great story to enjoy on me weekend off" P.S. The scene with Shiori it was very touching not alot of people can capture the feeling and reality of such a situation as you did... please take the time to read my fic "I Heard The Whisper of An Angel" and PLEASE REVEIW! O.O
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Title: Keep Up the Good Work
Reviewed By: shinobihunter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, but I still want to know how it ends. I like how you thought of things I never would have imagined, like Yoko separating from Suichi. I hope you finish soon.
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Reviewed By: Sheamaru-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:42 CST
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WHAT THE HELL DID YOU STOP FOR?? GOD YOU BAKA KEEP GOING!!!
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Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
(up through chapter 4) I do like the simplistic nature of this fic...very useful for the purpose that you want to use it for. Fear. There's also some unspoken psychological insight into the "victims"...maybe you could heighten that feeling of peering inside someone's mind if you perhaps were to just describe without naming in some passages. Ex. "A black rose, slowly forming into a whip in the dark figure's outstretched hand. The thorned vine hunted for the girl's throat, seeking it out of instinct. Blood spilled yet again, and she was left with nothing to say..." Just an idea. -SPS
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Reviewed By: JessiRae(Too lazy to log in) On: November 22, 2003 13:28 CST
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O.O Scary...I'm so freaked out right now!!!*Creek* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*Gasp*AAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Roofy007(to lazy to log in) On: November 22, 2003 11:32 CST
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hi this is so exciting i love Kurama!!!!!^_^ update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Maho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. It kinda scared me because its storming where I live right now. Please update soon!
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