| "Protector of the Three Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
uh i like the story, but why do you have the same chapter twice?
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Title: protector of three worlds
Reviewed By: shelli-alb On: November 09, 2003 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
um... our second chpater is not repeated on fanfiction so i am sorry to say that i did not post it on this site either shelli-alb
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Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is great so far but chapter 2 is the same as the prologue....Just to let you know...but keep up the good work!!!Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: bee3 On: November 09, 2003 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
this story seems interesting. i can't wait for the next chapter, but your 2nd chapter is a repeat of the 1st one.
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