| "Love across time" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: Rose Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! seeing them die then brought back to be with there lovers is so cool!please update i would love to see this story go on.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 08:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Read the other chap! You're not going to make us wait that long for the third chap are you? This is really interesting and Heero hasn't even been re-introduced. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 08:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
WAHHHHHHH! Jay is such an ass! I wish you had described how he was killed. Oh well. See ya later. I have to read more to catch up!! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: November 22, 2003 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep writing!!! This is really good.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 15, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, maybe I need to wait for more of you. This was interesting.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 10, 2003 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has a nice begining, it keeps the reader wondering what will happen and how will all the lovers meet and in what determined lifetime? However the lenghy amount of time you spend ranting with Dou could be best spent writing the next chapter. Other than the fact that you rant at the begining and end of the chapter, I have no other complains. Well that is for the time being, because knowing me if you leave on a huge cliffhanger... I'll probably organize a lynching mob. LOL! Keep up the good job and update soon
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