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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's was really good. WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: kensvixen On: November 21, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good you really need to update!!!!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: ToHeLlWiThNiCkS On: November 12, 2003 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...its a great start. it makes you feel like you are there in the story keep it up. i like the story line too. is the battousai going to be alot in this story??? (he should be cos he is really cool) ^_^. UPDATE SOON. oh and there's nothing that i think you should change. its all good! ;)
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