Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 07:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow ^^ nicely written *-^ I especialy liked your word choices, they were pretty well made ^^ there were only a few tping errors, so that's pretty cool as well *-^ I liked the way you wrote this, though I think it switched between present and past tenses a lot.... I could have just emagined it though. Over all, a ver nice story, and somehow it felt fluffy, especialy towards the end ^^ I most deffinently got a hateful feeling. I enjoyed this, well done *-^
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